A Promise Kept - Chapter 24 - Dragons and Pukwudgies
Added 2025-09-11 13:00:12 +0000 UTCThe beginning of the tournament...
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I think it's his writing style. However, since Avalon, the glazing feels a bit excessive. Despite that, I still find his story more enjoyable than the vast majority of HP fanfiction.
mnemnoch
2025-09-15 05:09:16 +0000 UTCLupin is the care of Magical Creatures professor, he took the job Dumbledore gave Hagrid in the books and movies.
Matthew
2025-09-13 18:09:25 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this chapter, particularly the teachable moments with Filtwick & McGonagall. I would like to see more paragraphs dedicated to his learning at the American school, cause otherwise what's the point of him being there. At least when he was Cassie's pseudo grandson, his learning at Durmstrang was a focus. Also, are Sirius & Remus just swapping out each yr to avoid the curse? If so, that's quite funny. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. Please continue with more POV moments and can we get a Voldy update?
Sunny
2025-09-12 18:27:18 +0000 UTCThere is too much time dedicated to praising Harry in people's thoughts. It's chapter after chapter. In fact, a lot of other time is spent praising others as well such as James and Charlus. I think just once or twice is enough and then more time doesn't need to be wasted on it. I still enjoy the story overall. This is an issue in every story.
AlexanderR
2025-09-12 11:18:58 +0000 UTC
