A Promise Kept - Chapter 22 - St Mungo's
Added 2025-09-04 13:00:12 +0000 UTCThe aftermath of the Quidditch World Cup...
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To be honest though is bit of a slow build for sure and still waiting for something relatively interesting or cool to happen and be entertained. Seems like at least compared to Harry in previous stories this one seems bit underpowered whereas in previous ones he was usually way overpowered even at this young age. I mean sure hear lot of Harry's anger and all, but ain't totally seen lot of it so much.
TheNinja
2025-09-06 06:02:36 +0000 UTCNahh... what was this chapter??? So, did Harry die or not, cause him waking up was very anti climatic? Also, the whole chat with Tonks was kinda 🤮 and this triad of connection with the Delacour women, along with Sabine somewhere, is low-key getting ridiculous. I know when the author suggested stories that he said this wouldn't be a multi story, but the line is being towed with. Lastly, why the hell is Voldermort furious?? Bro doesn't even know you're back and nearly took a major player of the board. Fully respect Lucius and his self awareness that he might have effed up. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
Sunny
2025-09-05 06:53:41 +0000 UTC
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