A Promise Kept - Chapter 11 - Family Legacies
Added 2025-07-27 13:00:09 +0000 UTCMore twists and turns on the way...
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Why are people so fussed about the chapter numbers... Anyway, another good chapter. I enjoyed reading Sirius's POV, along with the confrontation with Sabine's Dad. Your Harry is just Harry... deffo feels familiar to Cassie's Harry. As noted previously, I do think you're doing a disservice to Lily Potter. She's more than just an over bearing mother. Like I wanna see her do her own thing... maybe join Sirius and go back to the UK, visit Snape, Slughorn and the other professors. It just seems like there's no purpose to the character besides waiting for Harry to come back from Ilvermorny. Anyway, thanks for the work!
Sunny
2025-07-28 10:39:49 +0000 UTCYour chapter numbers are all over the place with this one. Please sort it!
CJ
2025-07-27 20:38:22 +0000 UTC
