A Promise Kept - Chapter 8 - A Father's Legacy
Added 2025-07-17 13:00:12 +0000 UTCMore progress during first year...
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I think it is rugby with an exploding ball.
odzoo
2025-07-19 03:45:14 +0000 UTCLol, is Quodpot just magical Hot Potato?? I enjoyed the call back to Stepping Back, re the McGonagall Tin incident. I understand why you've written Lily this way, but I feel like she's a badass in her own way - charms & potions expert - and so if anything it's most magicals that need protecting from her. I hope you continue with the different POVs. There's a lot of great characters, both good & bad, so you might as well use them. Also, I wanna know more about the American Magical Mafia that you low-key set up in the last chapter. Anyway, thanks for the chapter!
Sunny
2025-07-18 07:51:16 +0000 UTCSome nice filler there, cool to see different type of magical sport too and it would be a good source of stress relief for Harry too.
TheRonin
2025-07-18 01:44:07 +0000 UTC
