A Promise Kept - Chapter 7 - Sustained
Added 2025-07-13 13:00:11 +0000 UTCA different twist to watch you may be used to...
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It was nice reading Sirius just being happy, with him not being in Azkaban. Also, it was good to see Albus taking a proactive approach, although not sure how much I agree with him struggling against Quirrellmort, especially with your narrative that powerful magicals age slower, so he'd still be powerful enough to deal with Riddle in that form. Didn't particularly like the marriage talk. I mean I get it, but no way an 11 year old is thinking about that type of stuff and so it just seems a bit silly. I hope to see conversational chapters with Lily, Sirius & Harry. The former of 2 are pretty much the concept of the story, so it'd be nice if you could show their relationship developing over the years. Thanks for chapter!
Sunny
2025-07-14 12:56:01 +0000 UTCTHat was a different way for it to end for sure. Makes me wonder with the attention to Isabelle if she is to end up the one Harry ends up with at some point or not. Her or Sabine anyway.
TheRonin
2025-07-13 20:20:17 +0000 UTC
