The Sword of the Winter Rose - Chapter XLIV
Added 2025-06-29 17:09:34 +0000 UTCApologies again for the delay, but between finishing Avalon and having to consider with how to proceed, and writing the opening chapters of 'A Promise Kept' this has taken something of. a backseat.
I will do my best to get back to more regular updates for this from here on out.
Comments
While unlike George, Mr. McCusker is capable of finishing his stories, so I’ll take whatever creative liberties he wants to make. But you do you.
Matthew
2025-07-03 20:29:29 +0000 UTCThe current timeline is on or about 290. At that time, Theon should be ~9-10, Asha ~14, Maron ~16, and Rodrik should be anywhere from 17 to 22. So why no mention of either of the elder Greyjoy children? It's inconsistencies like this regarding dates and times and people that break immersion for me in an otherwise good fanfic. Even Mance Rayder shouldn't have started his consolidation of the Freefolk, as he deserted ~288. At most only 2 years before the fic timeline. And thus there shouldn't have been a Freefolk exodus as in the fic.
Omar Syed
2025-07-02 10:51:55 +0000 UTCVery good chapter!<
Alex Lafrance
2025-07-01 13:22:29 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter! Can’t wait for the next one.
Matthew
2025-06-29 19:21:47 +0000 UTC
