Avalon - Epilogue - Part one
Added 2025-06-12 13:00:10 +0000 UTCThe first of three epilogue chapters...
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Wow... from what has been written so far, Harry's daughter is being incredibly stupid... not only that, but it's on purpose! You would think she would know better considering what she MUST have been told about what her father had to face! She is being way too butthurt about the fact that Harry hasn't told her about being from the a different universe and more than 1,000 years from the current date. With how much stock Merlin put on the stars, which had him trying to murder her father in very underhanded ways because of it, she would be far more cautious about putting too much stock in what countless balls of distant burning intergalactic fart gases have to say. I would have put that nonsense to rest by telling her where he is from and what stars ACTUALLY are and why using them to tell the future is bloody stupid. She is being so stupid that it might end up getting her father, or other members of her family killed. As the great and wise old dragon "Party-Snax" said "Those who try to hasten the end, may delay it. Those who work to delay the end, may bring it closer." The same can be said for her actions in trying to see where the path leads. It can, and looks like it WILL end up in the last place she would have ever wanted which is either with her family suffering a great loss or with her family being cursed for all time. I really wanted to backhand her when she was asked why she kept going there to see that knob and said it was where she needed to be. SMDH.
Edward
2025-06-13 13:54:01 +0000 UTCIdk why everyone is being so negative lol there are 3 parts to this epilogue. Just wanted to lyk I appreciate all the work put into this story, it's been amazing, and I think they are all just being brats.
Keeperofthevoid
2025-06-13 05:14:34 +0000 UTCOverall I enjoyed this first part
Justaguy33
2025-06-12 14:27:50 +0000 UTCThat is why there are 3 parts to it
Lee McCusker
2025-06-12 14:23:48 +0000 UTCThe epilogue is supposed to be about closure. As far as my enjoyment of this chapter goes, you've missed the mark.
Hannibal St.Michael
2025-06-12 13:40:49 +0000 UTC
