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Avalon - Chapter 65 - The Birds

Trouble for the Dark Lord...

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Still can’t read this chapter. WTF

Tyler T

I think Tom had skid marks in his shorts at the end of the chapter.

odzoo

These edits are included in the doc in # editorial. Please continue to post what you notice. I occasionally find something I missed in these comments. Thank you.

odzoo

Every time I try to read this chapter, it says service unavailable

Tyler T

A grouping of eagles is called a convocation or an aerie. Why didn't add the snitch to the aerie? Great chapter by the way. I feel this part of the story might be wrapping up in less than 5 chapters.

Hannibal St.Michael

Minor correction for when it's uploaded, "darkening sky. “And I is going to kill me for"" And I to Andi I just grabbed a few words around it so you can find it Second one "You think he will him" Pretty sure you meant to have to have it be "you think he will kill him"

Brent Barclay

I'm a sucker for a good Blood Eagle

Ryan

So good dude. I love it when a plan comes together. Love the ruthlessness and planning by Harry.

The Humble CTurtle

The build up is crazy. Great story!

Fallou Amar

There ain't no eagle like a blood eagle!

SmittyBoi

"The Birds" uh-oh, Lee's entered his Hitchcock phase!

Tony


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