Avalon - Chapter 15 - The Daughter's Return
Added 2024-08-22 13:00:14 +0000 UTCMany twists and turns ahead with some more familiar characters making an appearance with lots of action to come...
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Kind of wish Helena hadn’t been killed off so quick. I always found her back story and character kind of cool. She just showed up to have a rather unremarkable off screen death.
Church22
2024-08-23 14:29:19 +0000 UTCIn general I love your stories man, but honestly your pacing feels off on this one. We are well progressed on Harry's relationships in the past now. Maybe it's the POV shifts to Arthur, not sure. The pace just feels like it's dragging without any (felt) progress. Just my 2 cents. Either way love your work in general man. Definitely one of my favorite fanfiction authors.
Vninga
2024-08-23 04:39:34 +0000 UTCBloody hell! The connection transcends through time, that's kinda awesome. I feel like Harry & Morgana will go together back to the future! Although, Lee plz do not give Harry Voldemort's magical knowledge, it just becomes a rehash of your other stories and makes all his hard work with Godric meaningless. Parselmouth & some of Tom's personalities traits, so he can bond with the fang is ok. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next.
Sunny
2024-08-22 22:44:22 +0000 UTCSo Merlin just allowed her to be murdered? Are we supposed to have any sympathy for this psychopath?
Matthew
2024-08-22 19:27:03 +0000 UTCCan't say as I am surprised though of Helena meeting her end, was just in a different way, but figured she would meet her end regardless. History might be changing some, but those destined to meet their end like her most likely wont change, I mean perhaps the way they do might, but death will still come for them regardless. But, then again time is fluid. The future is not yet set as we have seen. And I imagine more will change with Harry being there. I mean heck already perhaps Harry might very well have altered the path that Morgana could have ended up on, one of darkness and evil and now since Harry has come into her life perhaps it has changed for the better.
TheSerpent
2024-08-22 14:13:26 +0000 UTCNice to see Harry/Morgana progressing nicely as well, and of course he stuck up for her. Why would he not a girl that is not only a friend, but potentially slowly becoming more than that as well and is mutual too. Harry always was one to stick up for those being picked on. And in this case the little shit doing it was a big shit named Merlin.
TheSerpent
2024-08-22 14:10:30 +0000 UTCMy goodness there was so much in this chapter, so many Easter eggs for things to come. Loved it!!!
Raghav Chaudhary
2024-08-22 14:09:52 +0000 UTCWas interesting how ya showed a brief glimpse in the reaction to Harry being missing in his time. Will be curious to see if Tom will attempt to find him still or not as well.
TheSerpent
2024-08-22 14:09:17 +0000 UTCAn interesting turn indeed. Harry's presence already changing history it seems.
TheSerpent
2024-08-22 14:08:34 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Is Harry’s presence the cause of the butterfly effect for this death? Because if I recall, he killed her in canon because he was asked by Rowena to help find Helena/the diadem. Also, I’m curious how Dumbledore would stack up against the founders and Merlin in your story. No need to answer if that gives something away, but I’m curious if it had been dumbledore alive a thousand years ago, if wizards in the modern age would say, “Oh Dumbledore” instead.
Rick Malone
2024-08-22 14:03:46 +0000 UTCHA! Right in Merlin's face! I hope the histories write about that for students in the future to know it happened!
Edward
2024-08-22 14:03:31 +0000 UTCThat was amazing. It reminds me of the Game of Thrones episode with Joffrey getting shit thrown at him
James Shay
2024-08-22 13:30:15 +0000 UTCPerfect Chapter! Really enjoyed that ending...😉
Deity
2024-08-22 13:06:35 +0000 UTC
