All For You - Chapter 20
Added 2024-01-28 14:00:08 +0000 UTCThings will begin to get interesting from now on...
Comments
I thought you told people Greyback had been executed not imprisoned? I kept reading wondering who lied to who about Greyback being imprisoned. I kept waiting for someone to say why didnโt they execute him like they said or perhaps I am recalling the earlier chapter wrong? Or did you change plans reversing his execution?
Robert
2024-02-01 19:32:44 +0000 UTCBrilliant story so far! I'm glad for it, but this story feels like it's gonna be a long one. The way Amelia and Jameson are dancing around with each other is as bad as when Evans and Minerva were doing it, god just get a room. It would be great if we could get more Tom scenes and I think Harry should consider telling Dumbledore. It doesn't have to be everything, but confirm his suspicions about his ex-pupil, as he's playing a dangerous game keeping all the cards to his chest. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2024-01-28 23:46:43 +0000 UTC
