All For You - Chapter 10
Added 2023-12-24 14:00:11 +0000 UTCA little chaos which leaves Amelia in a state of disbelief...
Comments
Ha! I knew Harry would use the basilisk! Honestly, I was more surprised by the alliance with the centaurs. In any case, I'd love to see Amelia flirt with Harry and then leave him in the lurch. Payback is a bit**! ^^ Great chapter and merry Christmas !
Ellen E. Paris
2023-12-25 23:43:01 +0000 UTCHarry riding a basilisk into battle is the single most epic scene I've ever come across, in this author's works.
pra86
2023-12-25 05:55:39 +0000 UTCNot the best chapter. Greyback inner monologue was long and repetitive, action scene short and lacking details, greyback subdued very easily for the most feared and strongest werewolf. Also how did Harry have time to go to the school and get the basilisk and come back. The journey into the forest was written as long and difficult but a basilisk was able to make it to the werewolf hideout without being noticed
Ola
2023-12-25 02:36:35 +0000 UTCA perfect chapter in capturing in Greyback, although, if we're being prudent, it probs would've been for the best if Fenir passed away. The pacing of the chapter was really well done too, as there were no parts where I got bored and the intersections with Albus and Hagrid felt natural. I wonder what the next mini arc will be? Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. Also, Merry Christmas!!
Sunny
2023-12-25 00:11:07 +0000 UTCI like the chapter and the way u used the basilisk but I feel like u glossed over everything way too quickly. There wasn’t really time to get invested in the action sequence since it passed by so fast.
Ralnn
2023-12-24 23:30:19 +0000 UTCI thought he might use the basilisk, but him riding it in was unexpected and awesome.
odzoo
2023-12-24 20:17:38 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, will this actually be the end of Greyback? Rookwood is still out and about. I can't wait to read the reaction to this.
Hannibal St.Michael
2023-12-24 17:08:33 +0000 UTCI actually chuckled at that but honestly I was kinda expecting it.
Farooq Khichi
2023-12-24 16:10:51 +0000 UTCGood chapter. I never thought of using the basilisk. What does Harry plan with the werewolves? They’ve been slaughtering villages and eating people, so they’ve put themselves a bit beyond the pale.
stevem1
2023-12-24 14:43:32 +0000 UTCLmao Harry riding in on a basilisk is hilarious
thevolunteer
2023-12-24 14:39:11 +0000 UTCR they going to give greyback the kiss or something?
Mummy love me
2023-12-24 14:34:11 +0000 UTC
