All For You - Chapter 9
Added 2023-12-21 14:00:07 +0000 UTCSome Harry and Amelia interaction...
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Just 1 thing. If I remember correctly Harry mentioned to Amelia he is the new DADA professor in the last chapter but now she seemingly forgotten it when and Harry had to tell her again. Just something to check.
Jakub Horehleď
2024-01-22 00:40:30 +0000 UTCSunny
2023-12-22 08:21:42 +0000 UTCI like how you've made Tom look similar to when he applied for the DADA job. I reckon, like when Harry Peverell faced him, this version will be a harder opponent to the one in Jameson's own time, which makes it all that exciting. It's also nice to see that Harry himself has grown up as a person and feels little need to enter shouting matches with people. Really shows where he's at personally. Lastly, I think this is the first time, or at least one of few times, where the in efficiency of scent masking charms has been called out, haha. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2023-12-22 08:15:56 +0000 UTCWe got the introduction to Voldemort, Harry and Amelia traveling through the forest, and Dumbledore outside of the forest thinking lol. Great chapter.
AlexanderR
2023-12-21 18:09:11 +0000 UTCThis one is really shaping up to be good. Love the tone change from the previous ones
Harharryhar
2023-12-21 17:30:19 +0000 UTCHope you’re having a great day today guys
george zuki
2023-12-21 14:47:09 +0000 UTCHarry and Amelia are bonding. Excellent set up for the battle to come. Voldemort is finally on screen. All in all, an enjoyable chapter.
stevem1
2023-12-21 14:44:40 +0000 UTCThird times the charm!
Sammy the Shark
2023-12-21 14:16:59 +0000 UTC
