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All For You - Chapter 6

Interesting developments are coming...

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harry didn't want to be mentioned or connected to the investigation, and he told so to amelia. By the half way point of the chapter, amelia had told moody, her boss, who will tell the minister and she informed the coroner also... :p so much for trust

9mur

By Jove weโ€™ve got a right corker going here havenโ€™t we

Sunray

But in all honesty - great chapter! I just can't get over the fact that I read it so fast ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™‚๏ธ. I can't wait to see Yaxley getting a good hiding & Harry snooping around in the Ministry and if Croaker catches wind of it.

Bovragor

And now I have to wait for the next chapter. Again. Great. -.-

Bovragor

Love the dynamic between Harry/Amelia/Jenny . . . Reminds me of Castle/Beckett/Lanie from the Castle tv show.

Pedro Brigante

I do potentially see something between Harry and Jenny if nothing else than similar to how Harry was with Alessia or Daphne in Written in the Stars. Someone fun to be around, not necessarily anything serious because most likely something will either happen to her or cause them to part ways. And since has already been said beforehand that will be slow burn Harry/Amelia then to be expected that he would find interest in others before Amelia.

TheSerpent

Yaxley is looking like a toddler hitting a giant, lol.

Eric Lachance

I think a Cerberus or maybe a pack of them would make good guardians. Even Voldemort didn't know how to get pass them, he had to get Hagrid drunk to find out.

Hannibal St.Michael

Another good chapter. This definitely has a buddy cop feel to it. Jenny seems like a fun girl, but sensible. Yaxley might want to consider a long vacation out of country.

stevem1

I think it was already decided that the pairing would be Harry/Amelia. If Jenny got involved, then she would just be a temporary love interest, and quite a few of those tend to meet horrible ends in Lee's stories. It would be a shame if that happened to her.

pra86

Well now I just want Jenny to get with Harry. She seems like a right laugh.

thevolunteer


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