The Reaver's Legacy - The Champions
Added 2023-05-28 13:00:04 +0000 UTCAnd so it begins...
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I really enjoy both Cedric’s and Harry’s characters within this story. I like Harry’s mindset about the tournament as well. It’s definitely refreshing. & I really enjoyed the pique into Barty’s mind and how close yet far away both Harry’s and Barty’s goals actually come together. This was probably the best chapter thus far to me.
Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts
2023-05-30 01:37:08 +0000 UTCWhen he called her a “daft cow” I lol’d
Robert
2023-05-29 17:41:13 +0000 UTCGood chapter as always. There was a point you used impressed twice in the same sentence, when moody is holding them under the imperious. Was that intentional? I believe you said “moody was impressed, surprised, but impressed” or something like that. Good work though, absolutely adore your stories.
Reshad Haniff
2023-05-29 11:56:43 +0000 UTCReally like this angle you are taking for Barty. They certainly share a mutual hatred of Lucius and the Death Eaters who pled Imperius. I can’t wait to see how Harry handles these tasks with his mindset. Hopefully the chaser trio doesn’t abandon Harry when he makes it back to the Common Room. This Harry seems like he won’t really regain trust in someone who betrays or abandons him even once. Hopefully Remus can keep Sirius in Grimmauld when he finds out about Harry being entered. 😂 Cheers
Robert
2023-05-29 02:19:36 +0000 UTCWhelp… guess he won’t be paired with Fluer this time around. 😂😂😂
dabolts
2023-05-29 02:17:46 +0000 UTCA really nice chapter and I liked how you gave an insight into Barty's and Cedric's thoughts. I hope there's no awkwardness between himself and Ron & Hermione, as it's been overdone on the former. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2023-05-28 23:01:47 +0000 UTCI hate having to wait for the next chapter every single time 😭. Good chapter as always, thank you 🙏🏼
Aidan
2023-05-28 18:46:37 +0000 UTCOh shit! This man cracked the plot early! Well, now the author is gonna go with plan “B”. Harry will have to overcome Death’s true Champion! “Will Harry reclaim his inheritance and defeat the final enemy?” Exclaims off screen announcer!
Sage Berthelsen
2023-05-28 16:22:00 +0000 UTCI wonder how Death’s gift in Harry’s blood will interact with V at the end of the tournament…
Jonathan W.
2023-05-28 15:43:18 +0000 UTCIf this is a big set up and best bro Cedric still dies during the tournament I’m going to be mad. I have to say I really like how you’re giving ‘screen time’ to other characters than Ron and Hermione. Harry’s visions and life experiences have matured him beyond his age and it’s only natural he’d click more with older classmates like the 3 chasers and Cedric. That’s not to say he’s not friends with Ron and Hermione but they aren’t as close as they were in canon.
Bellerophon
2023-05-28 13:39:33 +0000 UTCGod I hope Harry shuts up Fleur with his performance in the tasks.
Yash Patwardhan
2023-05-28 13:16:20 +0000 UTC
