The Reaver's Legacy - The Old Days (Part One)
Added 2023-05-18 15:44:15 +0000 UTCAgain, patreon decided to delete my schedule. Apologies, but here is todays' chapter
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Oh man I’m genuinely hoping Harry gets his opportunity
Markus Antonius
2023-05-19 08:43:18 +0000 UTCThis chapter really read well and again felt as if it fell out of the pages of the actual book, specifically the opening scene at the Burrow and Harry's small prank on Hermione. I do feel Harry - who has complete right - is a tad harsh on a 21yr old Sirius, as the former wanted to keep Harry but Hagrid, on Dumbledore's orders, all but demanded Harry to keep him 'safe' and if your brother, in all but in blood, was killed you'd want to try and get justice. The 2nd part should be interesting. I don't think Harry should seriously maim anyone, unless the DE's go beyond levitating the can't-spells and start seriously attacking the innocent. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. p.s. - please can you add an extra challenge(s) in the Triwizard tournament.
Sunny
2023-05-19 07:42:59 +0000 UTC
