Written in the Stars - School Life
Added 2022-09-15 13:00:07 +0000 UTCAnd here is the next instalment for you guys...
I won't be doing a day to day running of the first few years of schooling, and will get to the meat of the story quite soon.
Comments
I really like the two month jump already. I also enjoy the direction you are taking this Harry in, he is way more sure of himself, and acts when he feels the need. I look forward to seeing how he is going to continue to develop.
Mark Quaker
2022-09-18 02:47:38 +0000 UTCGreat chapter with alot of good moments, i would like to see harry with lucinda or ana even if it is briefly and i really like harrys personality and How he sticks with his friends and i hope they will remain together, i like all of them,and i like How you are writing pansy, maybe we can have some of daphne being her friend or something(i like daphne greengrass much) even if she is not with harry, i think she will be good in the story.
Bob
2022-09-16 16:19:55 +0000 UTC