MME: The Magic Marble
Added 2024-09-16 02:34:26 +0000 UTCThis is in a First Draft State. So,
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This is more of an anthology. No one knows who Mabel is or why he sometimes takes cash or takes a sample of the buyer's hair. Also, there's a continuation of the Magic Marble where two delinquents, Jack and Sam, find the marble and get caught by the Dean. It's incomplete on the first draft side, but there's a good amount of pages. So there is time for Mabel's warning to come true 😉 And I have 4 more incomplete stories of Mabel setting up shop in different locations. The one with the Duke's son is the only fantasy setting the rest are modern day Earth.
PaulMichaels
2024-09-17 01:22:31 +0000 UTCThe comment Mabel makes at the beginning about swallowing the marble feels like it should be foreshadowing. But it never comes up again, I kept expecting Wilma/Liam to misplace the marble at some point start turning back into a boy, freakout and then swallow the thing so she can stay a girl. On anther note, could you post a bio/overview of Mabel and the magic emporium? I’m wondering about His motivations and if/how these stories tie together.
Turbonoch
2024-09-16 20:56:37 +0000 UTC
