XaiJu
PaulMichaels
PaulMichaels

patreon


I need your help!

Hey all!

So, this has been bugging me for a while now, and I feel like I need your guys' help. I think I've written enough to complete Volume 4, with Chapter 262: The Two Little Idiots being the last chapter. It caps off a good amount of lore and revelations. Plus, Chapter 263: Showing Signs of Change feels like a good fit for the intro to the next volume.

My reasoning is that there are many plots swirling around right now that could lead to Volume 4 becoming double the length of the other Volumes.

Here's a sneak peek into where we are going after Chapter 277.

 There's more, but that's what I have in mind before I will call it done. I feel like I have started Volume 5, but I want to ensure I'm processing this correctly.

Thanks all!

Comments

The only thing this story need is big tiddy goth girl or some nipple chain ;)

Mimm3l

It's all good, Tyler. I know it's not for everyone, and I'm aiming to give this group their respect unlike most harems and it's only going to be Rya, Quinus, Nieren, and Hilda. Thanks for all the support, and I hate to see you go... I hope you have a good day, and maybe I'll see you in the future if you like how the free stuff is going.

PaulMichaels

Disappointed this is going a harem route, probably going to drop it. You're a very talented author though and I wish you a ton of luck going forward!

Tyler

I think you're right that 262/263 is a good volume ending/starting point. The statue ceremony and revelations feel like the climax to a volume (chapters involving the Gods always work as great bookends). Also, in general, it's nice to have at least somewhat similar length books (four being twice as long as the others is a bit too much, imo). Outline for the rest of volume 5 looks great as well.

Athetos

The only issue I can see with that is that is it won't resolve the low point for Hilda. The ending I had in mind is Rya and crew repel the invading forces of the Alliance killing Prophet Paul and a few of the Principality. With Rya finally finding out that she is pregnant.

PaulMichaels

I like that. We'll see how it turns out because this stuff isn't fully set in stone, but at some point we will be going against the High Elves.

PaulMichaels

I forgot to mention that I'm probably going to give this 24 hours before I make my decision.

PaulMichaels

I like it that Hilda might be asserting herself more as her own person. The BS of the three needs a good smackdown. In their arrogance they believe that she will further their schemes, but her tossing a wrench (or five) in to the mix might cause some delightful chaos. She can still be an unknown to Rya and Quintus as she has learned how to keep her own council (a survival instinct). Don't make it so easy to tease out her alliances/opinions. Let her be crafty but not treacherous. An enigma wrapped in a mystery with her own motivations based upon the terrible things she has been put through

Tishers

I would try to find you volume climax after Quin takes Neirin 🤔 and transition to a new volume.

Micheal Kennedy


More Creators