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Magic of the Flesh 164-171

Marcus and Trish have a quick chat and Crystal slowly realizes some things about herself.

Good times all around!

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Not a bad idea! It's got me thinking. I'm throwing together some ideas now, I'll be looking for some feedback on them in a little bit :)

PervyPagan

Yeah that's true colors could be problem... And there would be too much colors if you would have more people talking there. So it would look like crazy colorful circus. So that probaly wasn't a great idea. 🙈 But thank you for listening.

GBHMAX

Thanks for the feedback! You're right, coming back after a day I can see how it's not as implicit as I thought. Colors might be hard with the colored panel frames but I'll play around with it some. See what I can come up with!

PervyPagan

I love this story... But one point could make it easier to read. Sometimes is hard to know (understand) who is talking at the time. I think that some colour differences, smybols, or just naming the direct speeches would really help. Anyway happy new year, wish you all the best and please keep going at least as good as last year. 🙏

GBHMAX


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