Ruby's Workout Page 32 WIP

All characters presented in this image are fictional, 18 years and older, and the acts depicted in this image are consensual to the individuals involved.

32 is on it’s way! Ok so throughout the weekend and a few days before that, I took the opportunity to solidify the entirety of this comic. I can’t afford time anymore due to what my situations and path in life and I can’t work any faster than I can now but I can prepare more. With that being said, I tried to compress the information of what I aim for in this comic so that It doesn’t go on for too long, sends out the intent and goal, and has a clear path rather aimlessly going through the cloudy idea of what the next page will be. I have storyboarded major points and such but I haven’t invested time into making a clear path. I’ve finally done so, however I do not think I should announce the amount of pages quite yet due to how I excessively keep saying that things may change. Unfortunately I had to go astray from my first intentions, along with many aspects of this comic, but I had to sacrifice/change these things so it doesn’t prolong itself more than it should. No ETA on when it’ll be finished.

As for the page, Im trying more angles rather than just frontal and profile shots. Not that I have a problem with those kinds of shots, I just feel I’ve done it too often. In tandem with this, I wanted to “express” the body a bit more as well. you’ve heard me say it before in that when I render something from sketch to complete, It feels more stiff for some reason. A lot of it may due to how “raw” the image is so I felt maybe If I counter it with the body language, it may help? Of course there is more elements to the loss of “energy transfer” from sketch-to- rendered such as line weight, additive lines surrounding the character to invoke if theyre scared, cold, etc., the motion blurs and how much there are, and so on. I should work on those as well but I feel the body language should be a focus as well. anyway, hope you all like!