Bmtbguy

Feels like old times already

Added 2021-10-06 13:11:55 +0000 UTC

As my health improves significantly, here am I building random pieces to base future scripts, mostly in the name of fun, not schedule. This is something I didn't do for a long while.

Last times I did this for real, were the Cheap Tricks 39 original scene and one of Domina's Valley 28 scenes: I wanted to compare, check assets height in order to ensure the flow of the scene and feel the scene, something that needs visual reference, and man, it feels good doing this just for fun...

In the test above Peter and Jessy talk to friends in opposite directions a couple of chapters ahead, once again, very different to the draft idea that had Jessy crossing legs while Peter talk to his male students far away.

It shows how much a script can change and improve when facing a "camera direction" so we can see it better. It is all about transmitting the feeling to the reader in a more enjoying manner.

Meaning that while making this I decided in the inclusion of Alice, Andrew, John, and Giselle and a VERY important question that was answered in an early chapter, hehe.

I can't render it in the real scene due to spoilers but I'm sure I can render it at DVU, but only Jessy and Peter. Do you guys want a "final render" of it?

Let me know.