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Partly Damned episode 2 !

FINALLY! Can't believe it's been 4 months since I uploaded the first one, but hopefully you'll think it was worth it when you'll see the result! Here's to future episodes being ready quicker, I'll try my best!

As always, I'm excited to hear what you think, and THANKS for supporting this series if you're a patron! <3

Partly Damned episode 2 !

Comments

Continues to make me laugh. Thanks :)

m-e account

This is really pro.

mkb

So damn good, A+, 5 stars

Rabid-seastar

Excellent work. It was worth waiting for. Thank you.

stealth

This is perfect!!!! It was worth the wait.

Kusal Munasinghe

Oh wow, that was great. The soundtrack was on point! Especially the scene at the end when Zoey is exploring the house. The movement and shot cuts followed the rhythm nicely, and those instrument builds when she enters the chandelier room &amp; then the sun room... wow that's some great attention to detail, and it really invoked Zoey's experience of the house perfectly. The voice acting was very well done again, and of course the animation was great. I especially liked the bit when she falls over the edge of the bed and her feet fly up. It looked very smooth and realistic(ish?). Looking forward to Ep III.

lisa r jordan

Just outstanding. So looking forward to more of your great work!

Steve Kelley

Looks pro

mkb

That was amazing

Porky

Thank you! You were pretty lenient on me this time xD

fgg22

Damn good! Great sound design, pretty good animation, great characters, dialogues and story. There are just a few things that you could work on at this point: 1. There are some minor collision problems that could be fixed with a bit more time. The specific one I’m thinking is the awkward positioning of the William’s hand when he goes to pet the head of the girl, it looks like he’s only touching her with his fingertips, and he seems to be digging into her hair when removing it. 2. The wind sound effect when we get outside at the end sounds more like wind blowing on a mic than some wind you’d hear by being outside, which breaks the immersion a bit. Other than that, there’s the problem of hair and clothes clipping through pretty much anything which even AAA games like Code Vein and God Eater 3 (and any game styled like anime, really) can’t seem to solve, so I sur don’t expect that of you, and the sound that could barely get better with pricier mics and recording in a closet full of clothes (unless that’s already what you do). Overall, I’d say perfectionism paid off, it’s great!

SlimeC0RE

Excellent work !

T

Really great ! Story, dialogues, voice acting, staging and of course animation, all is very well made. I particularly like the way she moves her shoulders ! Definitely worth the wait !

Thomas Lee


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