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WIP Pre-Sketch: DL III Page 19

Jake's smug aura is increasing, send help!

Correct me any grammar mistake or suggest if you think of better dialogue lines related to the context.

WIP Pre-Sketch: DL III Page 19

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Found it

MasterOfPhantom

Weres the coolord version

MasterOfPhantom

Apart from a question mark (?) after "yours", I find this dialogue is pretty natural! Looking forward to more!


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