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Pre-sketch| An inexperienced Guilmon pages 17-20

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Thanks for the corrections :3

Blitzdrachin

That "cliffhanger" in the last speech bubble made my fantasy go nuts! Yet, you might want to change "covered" in the first one to "drenched" for an extra emphasis on being wet to the bone(r). And please fix the last one from "his is more then" to "this is more than". Love what you're doing, keep it up!

Solomon


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