Comic update
Added 2020-12-04 01:34:56 +0000 UTCComic is taking... A really long time. I'll be completely honest that most of it isn't even working, but just worrying and coming back to already finished things, changing plans, editing. The further i go the more doubts i have about stuff i already finished. I ended up adding a few more pages, one to show a bit earlier stage of the story, as well as two ending ones to tie everything up. There is semi-coloured page, I'm working on actual text part... I should be done soon, hopefully. I apologize for such long wait, and thank you for your patience.
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Thank you so much for all the advice! I probably won't be shifting pictures and text areas at this point, but i'll keep it in mind for the future. Thank you!
Huffslove
2020-12-04 12:45:02 +0000 UTCAnyway, I love love loooove your comic and if you need any help with text blocking or anything at all please please pleeeease DM me on twitter <3
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 04:06:33 +0000 UTCI love how it's turning out so far!
Laurie Roswell
2020-12-04 03:46:44 +0000 UTCHooraaaaay more friendssssss https://gyazo.com/69b222acbece092e0a799dc9e8b94855 Those sneaky imps are coming out of the book when she's not looking... clever girls..
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 03:38:53 +0000 UTCSexy imps are sexy https://gyazo.com/b0a13d2abaa4befdb80d34e51243c050 (and also horny)
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 03:27:26 +0000 UTCAs the setup for the book, what it does, how it was acquired, is the entire focus of the story, this should be the largest text dump, everything from here does all of the "usage of the book" stuff, and shows the exposition in practice: https://gyazo.com/86aaab3ddac3d43957ebbe7167c91629
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 03:16:12 +0000 UTCDon't worry about it Huffs! I know, that given time and refinement, something amazing will come out of it
Alphazan
2020-12-04 03:02:49 +0000 UTCAs the story progresses you can change the stylized text boxes as the soft wife becomes a soft imp wife, becoming closer to the book. Writing becoming more esoteric, corners of pages being singed, fluids being spilled on the pages, writing trailing off as the writer becomes distracted by imps..
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 02:59:51 +0000 UTCSince you have a very open layout you can shift the location of images and add text in stylized text boxes, that better convey the story and the setting as a whole: https://gyazo.com/8d073cd4fc804fb73e2f788f369f647d
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 02:58:31 +0000 UTCYou have the advantage in this comic of not having individual panels to try and crush information into, which lets you push information off of the axis of a page to not interfere with any of the art on it
Nuwa Nightstone
2020-12-04 02:51:19 +0000 UTCTake all the time ya want! It already looks great. It's hard to beat back the anxiety, but you're doing good with pushing through.
MajorMooch
2020-12-04 01:47:52 +0000 UTC
