Chapter XXXIII – Day (2,190) – An Old Woman With Regrets
Added 2023-01-08 00:03:01 +0000 UTCAUTHOR’S NOTE: Any date with parentheses is a negative day from when Michael arrived.
I looked around and saw gray buildings. Other people were getting to their feet. “Listen up you new people!” I slowly turned to look at the man speaking. He reminded me of a pig. An ugly pig. He began to explain how we were all brought here to serve him and get him crystals.
I allowed the information to sink into me. Monsters, a store, and this city. That was when I heard the comment about restorations. Returning a person to their full health. I smiled slightly. This body was worn down, but I still remembered my lessons at the knee of my grandfather, Grandmaster of the legendary Eagle’s Talon style of kung fu.
With my worn cane in my hand, I hobbled out of the city after purchasing supplies with the rest of the slaves. It was obvious what we were. I had been a slave to many in the past. I took the chance to recall the horrors I had experienced growing up and the revenge I swore in my heart. I never had a chance to enact it, but this place was a second chance. A chance to right the wrongs that plagued me and rid myself of my heart demons.
Being orphaned at a young age, when my parent’s had been killed by the Japanese during the war. I had lived and trained under my grandfather for many years before leaving to seek my own future. My pig of a husband who had drugged me and got me pregnant. Forced to marry me to avoid the scandal after a visit from my grandfather. When my grandfather was killed by a Westerner who despised his kung fu, my husband took joy in beating me and my child. I could endure, but my child, she could not.
The police said I ripped him apart. With his family connections I had been sentenced to a labor camp in the desert. Humiliation after humiliation was piled up on me. But I had endured, for my grandfather had been far harsher in his training. But my kung fu could only take me so far.
Once I restored my body with these points, I would get stats and crawl my way to power. No matter what it took, I Hei Long, would rise up from the ashes like a phoenix reborn. None of the guards or the pig in man’s clothing had the signs of knowing the most profound art of kung fu. A shiver of anticipation ran through me.
They would all pay for I would return the suffering I had been put under a thousand fold upon them. They were all guilty. The lowest person to the highest politician. I would not spare any of them for what they put me through.
I left the city I entered a forest. I didn’t hesitate to seek out these small creatures that gave crystals. I came across the first one. A small green humanoid. That meant I knew where to strike. My hand turned into the Eagle’s Talon and my feet settled into the proper stance.
The people had been encouraged to take up weapons. But my hands were my greatest weapons. The humanoid rushed at me with some kind of demented screech. My hand shot out like it had done thousands of times in the past. I crushed the thing’s chest. It collapsed to the ground and turned to dust, leaving a small glowing blue crystal behind. A point crystal. I picked it up.
I didn’t stop. I had trained far harder under my grandfather. Punching a wooden board again and again, until my hands could no longer feel or move. Then he would command me to start again or give into my weakness. I was unrelenting in my training.
I applied that was mindset to gathering up these crystals to turn into points. I stayed out all night, not afraid in the slightest. For if Heaven had fated me to die, I would have died long ago. Now I had a chance at revenge, I would not hesitate to unleash it upon everyone.
Going slow, or taking it easy were not in my vocabulary. I endured and pushed forward as monster after monster fell under my peerless Eagle’s Talon kung-fu. When the monsters came back in the middle of the night and even more showed up, I smiled as I continued to fill my pack up to the brim.
Once it was completely full, I returned to the city in the early morning. The guards were asleep at their posts. I had seen such laziness everywhere in the concentration camp and more during my decades there.
I reached the plaza and there were no guards to take a tax. They thought everyone was asleep or didn’t think anyone would be awake this early in the morning. I turned in the crystals, and had over 5,000 points. I needed 4,751 for a restoration.
As a grandmaster of kung-fu I knew my body to perfection. I had spent countless hours in meditation and training. I had never stopped. No matter what hardship befell me, I always had my kung-fu from my grandfather.
My breathing came easily. My joints no longer ached. My body felt like it had when I was only twenty years old. I raised both hands up in front of me and clenched them into fists. I was reborn. No longer a frail old woman whose best years were behind her and full of regrets. I was now empowered once more.
The information provided at the start had already clued me into what I needed to do. The source of power came from these pillars. It offered to increase one’s Body and other areas beyond human limits. That was the greatest regret of my grandfather. To never take on the world with his kung-fu and crush all who had dared wrong him.
Don’t worry grandfather, for I will take up the mantle of grandmaster in your place. Your teachings will not die with me. They will carry on. I purchased some food and other supplies with my points before setting out once more. I was going to get all the points, and no one was going to stop me.
“Hey there lady, you really shouldn’t be out alone at night.” I paused to look at three young men who were approaching me as I made my way back to the forest.
“Oh, is that right? Then come here and teach this old lady a lesson,” I said with a grin as I immediately went into my stance. It was perfect. My years of experience, combined with my new body, made me unstoppable.
“Get her!” They came at me with clubs. I deflected one to the side. My hand shot out striking one man in the chest. I twisted my upper body to the side dodging a club swing. My other hand swept in and struck the man in the arm. His wrist didn’t shatter, but he dropped his weapon. The force of my blow and had been dispersed.
I didn’t let up for a second, as I stepped forward and struck out again. “AHHHH!” The man screamed after I ripped out his eyes. I spun and delivered a kick to the gut of another assailant. He collapsed to the ground wheezing.
I stepped forward and struck out, driving a fist into a man’s chest. I heard and felt his ribs break. I took another step and crushed the throat of the attacker I had kicked to the ground with my foot. I finished off the other two incapacitated men quickly after that. I looked around and there was no one else around, but someone could have heard the screams.
I quickly left the fight scene. Those had been scum, but even with the upgrades from the store they had been able to resist my kung-fu to some extent. That was unacceptable. I would need as many points as possible so I could never be stopped or threatened ever again.
It would take time and hard work, but both things I now had in spades. I started jogging, revealing in each and every step through this abandoned and creepy gray city. The rulers changed constantly or was one team or another.
That was one thing that had come up in the plaza. The ruler of this place was in flux. A person would take charge. Become weak. Then someone stronger would come in and kill them. An endless cycle of fighting for control and a lack of discipline.
The first step was to increase my personal power to truly make my kung-fu unstoppable. Once I had achieved this, I would then implement a system where people served me or died. They would then force other people to hand over crystals to me.
Then my power would increase exponentially. For while I knew kung-fu was the way forward, I also knew the power of the government. Now there was no government, I would rise up and become the government, empowering myself.
I had suffered at the hands of my previous government for far too long. They and everyone who stood with them had allowed my child to be killed and punished me. They had allowed a westerner to get away with killing my grandfather. Indignity after indignity had been piled on me. Now it was time to return that debt.
Those three men were just the start. Their pained screams as my kung-fu decimated them was music to my ears. Proclaiming my strength and superiority. I would not let that feeling go. I would never bow or be defeated ever again.
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Welcome to the start of Volume 7 and Antagonist Volume B, A Gentle Touch and The Grandmother respectively. Unlike games, the boss doesn't have to wait or send her minions in first as slowly escalating challenges. You will also get to see her rise to power and her backstory at key points in various flashbacks as we close in on the current day. Since she isn't about to share it in some heart-rending monologue.
And yes, her stats are giga-mega-enormous. The Almighty System is not responsible for non-system generated encounters and their difficulty levels. The main reason for her Antagonist title is the fact that many cultivation elders are often called grandfathers, but the grandmothers never get any respect. Well Hei Long is here to represent. Also, to show the unrelenting power of a Body focused martial grandmaster from arrival to the present time period.
Also the chapter released per day may fluctuate from 2 to 4 to keep the Antagonist chapters paired up and average out to 3 chapters/day to bring Patreon up to 90 chapters ahead of the free release.
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A little old lady can one shot a humanoid creature by hitting it in the chest. Mmmkay, sure, why not because as we all know like friendship kung fu is magic and not actually just an overly flashy sport fighting style that would lose out in life or death combat to any of the much simpler and more practical fighting styles used by military forces the world over. So glad I decided to come back to this story lol. Good to see that the ritualist wasn’t a one-off and in fact all the antagonists will be unbelievable and entirely unsympathetic mentally deficient anime characters who rise to power through the magic of plot armor.
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2023-09-28 04:42:37 +0000 UTCI've travelled so far, lived with troubles unhandled by God. But we'll get to that. Right now I want to tell you about how I got here. Cerulean light cascades upon the hive which thrums with echoes and prayers. Vines of information dangle from the white washed ceiling, feeding into orbs of light, each a variation upon what could be thought of as infinite possibility. Each one of them holds within an entire concept of reality, burning bright until all the entropy is spent. Everything impossible happens eventually, and that is why I maintain this garden. I'm looking for something you might call important. I feel bad for the processes within. They are like me, maintaining an infinity that can't be. Everything is transient in nature; even gods wither and fade. My thoughts are troubled. I see an orb flicker and flash, shooting motes of ball lightning through the ozone smell of my lab. It's happened before. An egg is born, an egg dies. Faith is cultivated in each one, harvested, and transmuted into power, but for what? Trillions are fed into a meaningless cycle. Only the lightning lives on. It sparks and seeds new universes with information. Or so I am told. I watch it spark and glide. I watch electric lace weave itself into a new and different form, dancing a dual spiral. Ideas and information strike newly-created possibility only to create a battery. Life arises from acids in engineered oceans only to fight itself and die. DNA twists and binds into a multitude of kinds, all to serve a grand experiment. At times I want to be the lightning. If only I could spark like that, living an eternity in an instant, just to strike again. Eventually each orb before me will reach a terminal point. They gradually stop glimmering as the processes within exhaust every possibility. Sometimes they can be repaired, but I can't stand the resultant cacophony of screams. It kills something inside of me. Maybe that is why I can't smile. The timer beeping snaps me from my revery; my sheldron is done. I pour myself a glass and savor the acrid aroma before I carefully sip. The warmth of distilled quintessence fills my chest, elevates my mood. "This is the day the Lord has made, rejoice and be glad in it." I scan today's schedule with practiced detachment. Lovely, an insertion team is due this afternoon. I guess I won't be sleeping soundly tonight. ===== A general conference has been called. I've been entrenched in my own experiments for some time now. Since I inserted myself I've been considered dead or missing.
Jason
2023-01-08 05:57:30 +0000 UTCGood points to maybe refine her details background a bit
Zarik0
2023-01-08 05:50:27 +0000 UTC"Being orphaned at a young age, when my parent’s had been killed by the Japanese during the war. I had lived and trained under my grandfather for many years before leaving to seek my own future. My pig of a husband who had drugged me and got me pregnant. Forced to marry me to avoid the scandal after a visit from my grandfather. When my grandfather was killed by a Westerner who despised his kung fu, my husband took joy in beating me and my child. I could endure, but my child, she could not" This is China we are talking about, westerners weren't allowed after the communists took control. The USSR and communist China were close allies for a bit. The only (theoretically) western people she could have met were USSR citizens. Assuming she is around 15 or 20 in 1940, which is when she is likely to have been married, then it was between 1940 and 1949 in whivh her grandfather was killed, most westerners were fleeing china at the start of the war and towards the end, the timeframe doesnt make sense. Also, her grandfather was an extreme radical, china at the time practiced foot binding, as a high class woman, she should be a cripple, her grandfather obviously had an influence on her not being foot bound, and he also took the extreme step of teaching a female how to fight, crazy stuff (for imperial china). Her grandfather was such an anti-traditionalist the he didnt let her be footbound and taught her to fight, why would he let her rapist marry her, it is inconsistant, he would be more likely to kill the rapist. It would be more plausible that her grandfather fled with her, made it to the coast of china, organised a merchant ship for transport, the western crew chose to murder him for his possessions, she escapes back to shore after escaping the ship (her child dies then or after she gets back to shore), she then ekes out a horrible life, first under the chinese nationalists, then under the communists, so she then has a plausible hatred of the west and of people in power.
HenryMorgan
2023-01-08 04:17:49 +0000 UTC