Brother Bewitched Chapter 35
Added 2024-04-06 12:10:37 +0000 UTCSerren's relationship with Devin continues to evolve. Asryn makes his move against Pattenia.
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Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-21 18:39:08 +0000 UTCApril 21
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-20 04:42:50 +0000 UTCApril 21
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-20 00:30:33 +0000 UTC21
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-19 16:51:02 +0000 UTCLOL on the boob shot! What day is your birthday?
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-19 15:39:20 +0000 UTCYou know, I have expected you to make a picture of her breast popping out of her shirt begin large at first. Good chapter. By the way, I'm having a great week. Myself It's my birthday soon.
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-19 02:55:46 +0000 UTCIf it is any consolation, I do believe I will be doing a mermaid story soon!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-11 08:05:29 +0000 UTCGreat story, but I was still hoping for He become an elf or a mermaid
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-11 06:01:27 +0000 UTCAwhile back I started buying mermaid related assets whenever they were on sale, so it could happen!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-08 08:21:19 +0000 UTCI hope so! We need more mermaid stories :)
Tungdil91
2024-04-08 06:55:17 +0000 UTClol!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-07 16:03:08 +0000 UTCYes you are right: Be glad we have noticed. It shows that we are in the story 😊. Next time, instead confessing you were tired, just say you did so on purpose as a test to know if we are attentive... 😊
Alexia
2024-04-07 10:59:37 +0000 UTCI can't get away with anything! I did try and skip over putting a shot or two of her in there just because I was exhausted and wanted to be finished. I even thought at one point-- I hope no one notices. Well, I appreciate that people do notice. Will go back and add a shot or two. She was actually invisible waiting for Asryn than appears behind him and casts the spell.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-07 10:46:03 +0000 UTCInteresting observation and comforting. I have wondered sometimes if I was over using certain settings-- a lot of the action takes place in Serren's room! However, I do find Serren's room a pleasing setting to shoot and it also makes sense to me.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-07 10:44:15 +0000 UTCI am glad you like Asryn's new look. Maybe Serren will even be a little jealous? Pattenia most certainly wants to show off her Asryn, so we will see her out and about.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-07 10:41:43 +0000 UTCAaah, I forgot: where is the witch who casted the transformation spell? Hidden behind the curtain?
Alexia
2024-04-07 06:36:37 +0000 UTCAt this point, the story follows 2 of the 3 rules of the french classical theater: unity of place and unity of action. Unity of place because everything occurs in Serenina's camera and unity of action because the story is centered on Serenina's forced wedding. I am pretty sure my comment will be interpreted as asking for more locations in the story but it is absolutely not the case: I like classical theater 😊
Alexia
2024-04-07 06:31:35 +0000 UTCThings turn well indeed between Serenina and Devin. ♥️ Asryn had became very cute. It seems that her hair has darkened during the change. Now he has beautiful hair, as black as Serenina's hair are blonde. I hope that as a serving girl, she won't be stuck in the kitchen but that she has to go sometime in Serenina's camera for her duty. It would be interesting to get some interactions between the transformed Asryna and Serenina. It would be also interesting if Devin meet the new Asryna.
Alexia
2024-04-07 06:17:48 +0000 UTCThe poll winner was human female! Maybe I will do a mermaid story one of these days.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-06 16:59:55 +0000 UTCYou are welcome!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-04-06 16:59:05 +0000 UTCThank you for making this story I like it a lot
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-06 16:11:05 +0000 UTCLovely Very very lovely but is he a elf or a mermaid 🧜♀️ 🧜♀️?
Joseph c guillory
2024-04-06 16:10:52 +0000 UTC
