Super Sister: Part 8
Added 2023-09-09 11:34:15 +0000 UTCThe day after his first kiss, Superboy finds himself feeling and acting like any silly, lovestruck school girl. Will Lana guess his secret?
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Fair enough. I appreciate your comments and think they are awesome. Thanks.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-09-14 19:35:09 +0000 UTCI am sure that this time you invest in the visual assets matters and makes the story more captivating. I don't comment the visual so often because I am more text & story focused but I have no doubt that the visual part has a deep impact on me, at a semi conscious level.
Alexia
2023-09-14 11:25:25 +0000 UTCThanks. It was my intention to try and keep the mood of the original and even some little touches, like Super Sister's retro hairstyle., that would call to mind the 1950s, though it is set in modern times. Even the layouts are inspired by the original, though sometimes it drives me crazy.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-09-11 03:39:12 +0000 UTCSuper Sister should be very grateful to you for revisiting her story. In the original, she was a non charismatic girl wearing plain clothes. She wasn't even supposed to have a love life... Thanks for fixing all that. Now she is incredibly cute. His biker boy friend is a hunk. And super sister's best friend and mother are also cute in their own way. This is a very refreshing. And you still manage to keep this light mood that is the best feature of the original.
Alexia
2023-09-11 00:08:54 +0000 UTC😻😻😻😻😻
Alexia
2023-09-10 17:26:23 +0000 UTCLol! The boy of steel is not ready to deal with teen girl hormones.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-09-09 16:57:13 +0000 UTCsuper sister need birth control pills.
Phil G1
2023-09-09 16:02:46 +0000 UTC
