Brother Bewitched 16
Added 2023-06-30 04:00:03 +0000 UTCHelpless, Serren hopes someone can save him. Who will step forward? Times of crisis show true character.
Comments
Glad you liked it. The story is diverging from the books with a different set of conflicts for Serren. However, there are still some scenes from the original book coming. Hopefully it will continue to be fun.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-07-19 07:50:02 +0000 UTCGood chapter shocking development that seren went to the knight and not his friend like a damsel in distress
Joseph c guillory
2023-07-19 05:07:41 +0000 UTCWhy thank you! It's really fun for me to put him in those stances, too! As I imagine it, he doesn't fully realize the way he's holding his arms, his wrists, but everyone else notices.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-07-01 03:24:21 +0000 UTCNow that you're mentioning it, Seren's facial expressions are well done. So are his moves and stances. That is probably why the sequence works so well. Also, it's a good idea to have dressed him in a white dress for this scene.
Alexia
2023-07-01 01:15:34 +0000 UTCYes. I do enjoy putting former men into these classically feminine situations. I spent a lot of time tweaking Serrens facial expression for maximum damsel in distress vibes. Will keep trying to solve the pictures
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-30 18:06:12 +0000 UTCYo have delivered a nice variation on the "save the brand new princess" pattern. You have covered this pattern very successfully inthe past on text only format. Now you score in the comic category. It tastes different, and it's fine. Picture are OK. Still dark on my phone, but I don't mind so much when the story is good.
Alexia
2023-06-30 11:54:38 +0000 UTCI have been building to this scene for several chapters now, and I am very excited to share it all with you. Please share your thoughts! Like and comment. I always enjoying hearing from all of you!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-30 04:12:17 +0000 UTC
