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ExC Draft

My original ExC draft! You can judge for yourself how much it has changed! πŸ˜„ I had to rethink a lot of things in order to spark the further plot.

It's fun to sometimes return to the original idea.

ExC Draft

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Thank you, thank you! I'm really glad that you really liked the outcome of this draft! πŸ₯°

steponeonedesire

Everything starts with a faulty start. The ExC story plot u have now is your showcase of improvement. Im not one to sugar-coat my opinion so im being completely honest when I say that

Mr. Mysterious


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