Derideal 12 - 29 (EP END)
Added 2023-04-10 15:51:52 +0000 UTCThanks everyone for been reading and supporting Derideal during this time.
special thanks also to the people who's been helping with the proof-reading and text corrections of the pages.
would you like to make another discord chat, but this time for discussing the episode? I'm not sure if that would be something interesting or not... let me know so I can organize something.
It took me lots of time to start part 3 of the story, and it feels strange to be finally here... but it's also strange to me to think there are still A LOT more of episodes to come.
Derideal is a story that got too long, it also shows how much I lacked training into writing stories, to keep them "contained", I've been learning that there are ways to "do the same" but with less pages, even if it means to remove cool scenes or concepts.
just a reminder! next episode will only update in Patreon during Monday and Friday!
Comments
Alpha and Ivory, it's just another scene. and the dialogs refer to things they're thinking
Andrés Barra
2023-04-10 18:04:41 +0000 UTCSo this is the Scientist's dialog here, or Alpha and Ivory's?
Shadow
2023-04-10 17:03:13 +0000 UTCAnother chat? why not? Its always nice disscussing with other people about derideal Especially with the next ep that will drop a nuke worth of guity on aden, judging by the cover 😅😰
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-04-10 15:56:27 +0000 UTC
