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Added 2022-12-21 16:33:05 +0000 UTCAnother page that I edited, removed one or two pages to speed the story up!
NEED TEXT REVISIONS! if anyone has text fixes, let me know!
UP1- some text changes in english page, ty @madpostman
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You could say The big bad is the Prime project director, who's calling the shots. but you can also think they're basically against the world, is humanity society in this world setting. this isn't a story about heroes vs villains, there's no rebellion that's going to defeat an Empire with a single battle. You're born free? or you're just basically limited to do whatever your family and society tells it's your duty? (that's sort of the parallel I was thinking when making a basically "slave critter" that was created to be part of an experiment and serve masters that doesn't care what are their own wishes. But give it time, things will make sense little by little, Derideal story I've found isn't easier to predict, and I take my time delivering building up the finale.
Andrés Barra
2022-12-22 01:20:12 +0000 UTCoh okay, i hope this story does not have a bad ending. if there not the big bads then who is?
John Doberson
2022-12-21 19:32:16 +0000 UTCahahah FIGHT FOR YOUR FUTURE!!
Andrés Barra
2022-12-21 19:25:57 +0000 UTCThe Consortium basically has free pass to do whatever they want in this city, and they're not the "big bads" in this world even... just a few people oppose the regime and try to act against them, and it's always sort of a lost battle. (there's no a rebellion in the way you could think, as people organized with power enough to fight back... there are just rebel cells and they're not so many to fight back, at least not yet in the story)
Andrés Barra
2022-12-21 19:25:36 +0000 UTCdoes the consortium ever get punished for what they did, or do they get away with it? also are going to kill the rebellion off like you did in the last version?
John Doberson
2022-12-21 19:22:27 +0000 UTCIf you want the After Dark story to even be possible, you've got to find her and keep her safe! Best motivation ever.
Kit Foxboy
2022-12-21 17:34:31 +0000 UTC
