Derideal ep 5, page 45 (extended end)
Added 2022-01-14 00:29:38 +0000 UTCUPD1- Text were fixed
I made this page as an extra bit for the story, like an epilogue page, epilogue memory...
I think it add to the emotional value of the ending, but I'm not sure if I'm going to keep it right at the end, or include it after Aden crash with the VWALLY robot and wakes up, not entirely sure yet where would it fit more.
Personally I like it being right after the previous page, as a final memory after he faints, I want to reinforce the "promise" so the unfairness of the end is a little bit more emotional.
I spent lot of time thinking the dialog and scene, it's a simple thing... but it's based of Derideal legacy episode 4, when Aden fears about his state of mind.
technically, it would also work at the end or beginning of Episode 5 "last stand"
Comments
It's like this really, just some element happen later or sooner
Andrés Barra
2022-01-14 01:35:03 +0000 UTCSo you keep saying, but that version is still there, everyone can still read it. It just won't keep being developed or taken into account for this version of the story
Andrés Barra
2022-01-14 01:34:22 +0000 UTCI'm afraid that I don't remember well how the first version of the comic was split, plotwise ^_^;;;
J. N. Squire
2022-01-14 01:30:27 +0000 UTCI still prefer the old chapter 4 xd
Memsys
2022-01-14 01:14:16 +0000 UTC
