Hey! do you like these commentaries on the wips? just curious
these pages are, in fact, the whole reason I wanted to make this story xd....
I've been wanting for years to make some lovecraftian tribute, I'm using lots of elements from his tales and from pop culture around his work, tried to find out a way to represent the "eyes" or "spheres".... also find a way to make the tentacles of the Old One to not look exactly like octopus tentacles, if you see, they're light, doesn't have much shadow on them, I imagine with stuff moving inside, but composed of a mix of organic translucid material. (can you guess which Old one they're facing just by this page... there's another clue in the next page)
I changed the dialogs in the released page, so it's felt more abstract, I even considered removing every dialog from the elder being.. but ultimatelly decided to put just a bit
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ORIGINAL
just the concept of the page, I should try to put dates to my notebook so I can have a proper track of when the stuff was drawn.

IMPROVED SKETCH
this is the improved sketch adjusted to the correct page size.

INK+LINEART

lineart only, without background textures.
I painted the shadows over teh lines this time, didn't saved the clean lineart xd, forgot about it
do you have any questions??