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Tara issue pg 6

Derideal after dark comic, getting moar after dark? 

feel free to suggest me better dialog than the ones in the pages, maybe it can be improved? Just consider the same bubbles.

I mean for example if I change the dialog between panel 3 and 4 for something "Woah, she smell so good" it would mean Martinez feels excited quickly, current dialog makes him just becoming more interested haha

bigger version of this picture is attached.

PS. I decided to give Martinez a more stylized version of an animal dick. I'm not sure what's better tbh, a more human-like anatomy or not, I think this is a huge deal for some people... personally, I don't care, so I might just change it from time to time.

but I'll stick with human-like female genitalia, for ever and ever


Tara issue pg 6 Tara issue pg 6

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