Library Cleaning WIP 23
Added 2024-09-22 14:21:00 +0000 UTCHey!
This week got animation pretty much done up to the conclusion! There is now a internal view of the first 5 mouse girls in Lily's stomach and I also animated Lily's throat as she swallows two more mouse girls!
The animation is basically done up to the conclusion, but there is just some extra detail needed after Lily swallows the two more mouse girls as she looks a bit stiff.
Here's an image of after Lily swallows the 2 mouse girls, the animation was missing a few details so i left it out of the WIP video.
Next Lily turns after she hears a sound in the cabinet over there and it the scene fades to black.
Afterwards the scene will come back and show Lily resting on Kirie's lap like this with a full belly! 
I'm going to work on the conclusion this week and hopefully finish it this week! Once finished I'm going to get ready to send this over to ZeroDarkness for some voice acting!
See the MEGA link or the attachments to see the full WIP video!
https://mega.nz/folder/enpXjQgT#Z3ELGttAauOtaPXMFcoDmg
Comments
Yeah, I agree, that cut is a bit too quick. The previous plan I had was to show Lily with both the mouse girls in her hands first, which would have felt like a more reasonable time frame for those things to happen. But I decided to just show her swallowing them instead, and at this point it would be hard to change so I'm probably just going to leave it.
Sikru
2024-09-22 15:07:47 +0000 UTCI think the cut between her reaching for the mousegirl behind the book to the mice in her belly was a bit too fast or sudden, but was nice to see inside her stomach again. As for the second one she swallows, I remember there was one hiding in the bottom cabinet that hadn't been grabbed yet, (till now off screen.) And with how Lily swallows them right after the other, they may have both been in her mouth, with one dangling halfway in or held in her cheeks as behind the shelf 6th was swallowed. The last still of Lily resting on Kirie's lap with her full belly is cute. She looks so proud of her catgirl.
NotHere03
2024-09-22 15:00:21 +0000 UTC
