Panspermia Ch1 Edits
Added 2021-01-20 23:22:19 +0000 UTCI've made a few edits to Chapter 1 as listed here. These have been updated in the vault archives too. The errors in page 16 in particular have been haunting me for so long, glad to finally have those fixed. :'D Missing navigation links have also been filled in.
- Page 2 - Revised the arm IV
- Page 3 - IV revision
- Page 5 - IV revision, other art tweaks
- Page 6 - IV revision, adjusted Erin's face in last panel
- Page 7 - IV revision, minor adjustment to Fayes' belly last panel
- Page 13 - Corrected cupboards
- Page 16 - Adjusted dialogue, corrected view of the ship, added annotations to Erin's scribbles
- Page 18 - Adjusted dialogue
Chapter 2 edits will follow soon, and it will be added to the vault then too!
