Rogue-Like 0.997e (Elde- I mean. . . Jean stuff)

Well, never be afraid to give feedback, I'm sorry if that came across as harsh or anything, I'm just being straight about it, but I definitely appreciate honest criticism, even when it is inconvenient. I made a few changes, I hope it's more on a better track here. To your suggestion about her top moving less, the tricky thing is that if her bottom moves too far relative to the top, then it looks too unnatural, like it can't be higher or lower than a certain point or she looks way too long, or way too compressed. One thing I've been considering is separating out the *middle* portion of her torso, so that she would move in three parts instead of two, which complicates the animation slightly, but would "cushion" the motions a bit, and might seem more natural.

Oni

Lol.

Oni

I always thought she was making some sort of pun

Baarogue

Thats fair, and I'm sorry I only brought up a problem with no proposed solution. I like all of the other missionary positions! I think Emma really looks great. Playing it more I think my eye is drawn to Jean's arms and shoulders and it seems like she is falling on me. If her top moved less and bottom moved more it might help. Just my two cents. Thanks for the great game :)

Chris Cat

If you say so.

Oni

Jelly

Fixed.

Oni

just noticed during the first meeting with storm there's a simple typo that could use correcting "so about the leak" > "you point to some puddles under some of her plants" > she replies with "ah, yes. My apoologies." > "i was watering my plants, and must have gotten a bit out of hand." > "On Moment..." at least i think that's a typo and not some sort of accent...

Simon

Any suggestions are worth considering, whether I go with them or not.

Oni

Hello Oni, I love your work but I do have to agree about the New Jean pose. I think I get what you were going for, but with the angles of her head, shoulders, back and legs, she does looks like some kind of hunchback of notre-Dame. That said, I can live with it (since I mostly go for the other girls ) and I absolutely love the way her pussy juices interact the dick in vaginal and Anal. However, I think if you want to improve Jean's new pose, you might want to look at Emma's and Ororo's similarity with Jean's. The legs/head/arms angles worked with Ororo, because they make us focus on her front aka breasts/pussy. The down angle and the legs position (in ana)l worked well with Emma, which, again, makes us focus on her breasts/pussy. If you want to modify it, I believe you can simply straighten her shoulders/arms and maybe her head. I think it would result in something quite good for those that are bothered by it. Nevertheless, I'm quite happy with the Jubilee stuff we got so far. Can't wait to make her a complete blowjob addict. Keep up the good work and don't be discouraged.

It was a suggestion from a friend of mine about I just copy pasted what he said, hope you ain't too annoyed.

Jelly

Another suggestion was this: I'd say her top part is okay, but needs to be slightly bigger +as it is closer to you in perspective). Then her knees should be clear set together with toes and knees pointed towards you.

Jelly

Yeah, fair. It was worth getting impressions on it, at least, but a very simple fix to move it back.

Oni

Well I enjoyed the pose others apparently don't, had a few friends mention it; A simple suggestion from me would be lower the sprite down a bit and scale it back a tad, as for shoving when you eat her out do what you like.

Jelly

Ok, I'll tweak that.

Oni

I think maybe what I could do is just not animate the upper and lower portions separately, and just fix them at a more natural angle to each other.

Oni

Well, ok. I don't know what the best option is. People seemed dissatisfied in the past when I went with the more missionary style poses, it seems like every option I try does not work for some portion of the audience. Redoing it from scratch would take months, but I'm unsure what an easy fix would look like.

Oni

Oh, sorry, fixed for next build, in the meantime, just don't use her wet hair style.

Oni

Ok, similar issue, I'll fix it for next build.

Oni

That is intentional, if people don't like it I can easily zoom her out a bit, but I figured "why not?"

Oni

Hi Oni. When I try FJ with Jean it leads to your new pose...

Folioman

Being raped by the chick from the grudge.... isn't a fantasy of yours? No? Just me?

Veteran of the Mushroom Wars

Oni I love your work, but this new jean pose is not good. Its like your being raped by the chick from the grudge. I just don't think this pose translates well in 2d. perhaps if you brought the legs down it would be better.

mugatu

I read Jean but my brain thought "oh new girl sex scene!" and I was very confused when I played this version.

FG13

Elden ring comes first oni, forgive me

TheCheeseBandit

I think this pose needs another pass. I'm a big fan of the game and all your other art, but Jean's new pose is off somehow.

Chris Cat

Agreed this doesn't look very sexy :(

Chris Cat

The frontal pose looks weird tbh. Esepcially when you do anal. Her body looks disproportianate, like a mix of two different sprites stitched together.

i also got this one [code] I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While loading <'Image' 'images/JeanSex/Jean_Spunk_Belly_A.png'>: IOError: Couldn't find file 'images/JeanSex/Jean_Spunk_Belly_A.png'. -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "script Locations.rpyc", line 3858, in script call File "script Chat.rpyc", line 128, in script call File "script Chat.rpyc", line 271, in script call File "Jean_Sex.rpyc", line 184, in script call File "Jean_Sex.rpyc", line 2126, in script call File "Jean_Animations.rpyc", line 3374, in script File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1289, in execute renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\exports.py", line 1406, in with_statement return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2123, in do_with clear=clear) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2553, in interact repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2916, in interact_core self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 1980, in draw_screen renpy.config.screen_height, File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 430, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6938) rv = render(root, width, height, 0, 0) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\transition.py", line 361, in render top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 392, in render return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 213, in wrap_render rend = render(child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2047) cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 318, in render surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 318, in render surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1236, in render return renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 318, in render surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1236, in render return renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 392, in render return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 213, in wrap_render rend = render(child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2047) cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2047) cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 392, in render return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\image.py", line 213, in wrap_render rend = render(child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2047) cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 702, in render surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2047) cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 318, in render surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1236, in render return renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at) File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3445) cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at): File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 196, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2983) rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 503, in render texture = cache.get(self, texture=True) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 212, in get surf = image.load() File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 553, in load surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename) File "C:\Users\andre\Downloads\Rogue-Like-0.997e-win\renpy\loader.py", line 548, in load raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name) IOError: Couldn't find file 'images/JeanSex/Jean_Spunk_Belly_A.png'. Windows-8-6.2.9200 Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919 Rogue-Like 0.997e [/code]

I believe i found a New Bug: While loading <'Image' 'images/JeanBJFace/Jean_BJ_Hair_Wet_Mid.png'>: IOError: Couldn't find file 'images/JeanBJFace/Jean_BJ_Hair_Wet_Mid.png'

Chaosdestille

Hey Oni, got a bug report. This one happened in a threesome with Emma and Jean while Jean was in the new front pose after finishing on Jean's belly. [code] I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While loading <'Image' 'images/JeanSex/Jean_Spunk_Belly_S.png'>: IOError: Couldn't find file 'images/JeanSex/Jean_Spunk_Belly_S.png'.

Funny occurence when eating out jeans vag then you view on top of you. I dunno if intentional but it has her consume your face with her lower body zooming right in

Jelly

Oh ye the jean frontal pose is hilarious and erotic I enjoy it. It makes me think of a cave woman whos just gotta smash.

Jelly

I had two things: Emma ran outta actions then her stating this was in an info box not speech bubble, Emma wanted to talk to me about something but I activated storms intro event so she didn't show up in my room like she should have

Jelly