About Little Sister
Added 2024-02-01 07:43:58 +0000 UTCI really want to continue Little Sister, but currently, the story's progress may require several more chapters if I stick to my initial plan. However, judging from the reactions to Chapter 9 and Chapter 10, it seems that most readers didn't like it very much. So, I'm not sure what to do now. I'm considering whether to backtrack to a previous chapter and start a remake or to keep the current story and quickly bring it to an end.
Need your advice!
Comments
I like Little Sister, but I'll be honest, at points, I get a little lost, because there are so many twists and turns. I still think it will be a great run once the story starts tying up loose ends, but I can understand why, in the meantime, it can appear very chaotic to a reader and make them less immediately interested
Jaspickle
2024-02-06 16:02:11 +0000 UTCI'll take the advice and adjust the story!
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:42:25 +0000 UTCYes I think you pointed on the point. But you know my style that all story will have a happy ending for main characters, so in my plan it will end in a good ending, it just got slow I think
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:39:34 +0000 UTCYes I'm considering that but that will cause a huge loss in the incoming...
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:32:50 +0000 UTCThank you! I wanted to extend Juliana's story but I don't know if you like it that the story goes too far from what it was at the first.
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:10:37 +0000 UTCIf I continue on my original story, Doris will come back.
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:09:19 +0000 UTC有可能,其实我倒是没有喜欢或者不喜欢这个说法,可能只是从皮物的角度来说从哪个人的方向更容易发挥一点……
YT_snow
2024-02-06 07:09:00 +0000 UTCi wantJudy Halloween with the red succubus. I mean I really like the one John wears! Plz!
haoyang luo
2024-02-05 23:57:27 +0000 UTCYou have plenty of stories going on in parallel and always can create new ones. Little Sister has been a long-running and successful story already. You don't need to push it now, let's see in a few months what comes up if you need to continue it.
Stella
2024-02-04 09:48:06 +0000 UTCStory is cool, mate
Damiano666
2024-02-04 07:17:46 +0000 UTCJust continue the original story at original pace!
Motec Jack
2024-02-04 01:42:24 +0000 UTCI like the story a lot. I love Juliana and basically everything your did with her since her introduction. I also like Katherine a lot a I don't mind if she's winning or losing. In general, Little Sister is your 2nd best story fo me (right after Judy), please keep going with it. Oh and Brother's nightmare was just perfect!
Shaya
2024-02-03 08:07:44 +0000 UTCThe only reason why I can think that people may not have liked the last few chapters, is because right now the villains are winning, and winning hard. Most people don't like seeing the main characters get trapped, or violated. The other reason might just be that your other works are just much better in peoples opinions and they would prefer to see those stories continued. For me its both. When there is a vote for the next story I don't think i have ever voted for little sister recently. Partially because its in a very dark place right now, with no visible hope for the titular character and her friends to survive, and i don't like those kinds of stories. And also because I like False Honor more and will always vote for that.
Loalus
2024-02-02 21:47:05 +0000 UTCKeep going still like the series
Oh yes sir
2024-02-02 03:32:38 +0000 UTCVotre histoire sur la petite sœur est génial c'est l'une de mes préférés avec Breakout. Breakout était une bonne bd pour quoi ne pas faire une suite se serait cool. Et pour la petite sœur j'aimerais voir plus la peau de Rosa car je la trouve très sexy❤️. Et aussi continuer votre super travail avec beaucoup de scènes de peau différentes j'adore.
Katarina Coeur
2024-02-01 23:51:03 +0000 UTCLittle sister for me is my favourite storyline to read over and over again. It has a great mixture of skinsuits, multiple laying, latex, sex, desires, and characters. I do get the comments about the adding of new character so often but like to see how the story goes with the current characters. But as many has said, it's your story, you do what's feels right for you. We came into your world and many stayed for it. Looking forward to what ever you create in the future.
hkc_junkmail
2024-02-01 21:26:34 +0000 UTCI second this opinion.
John
2024-02-01 20:39:59 +0000 UTCSo the series kind of lost steam for me when all the characters succeeded in their revenge for each other. I think things were at their best when they were all trying to impersonate one another to get a leg up on their competition. Now they're all just fucking around, pun intended. I personally would like to see some of them going down the personality manipulation route. Whether its getting their own personalities modified by the skinsuit or one of them becoming conscious as a skinsuit and trying to take back control. I think either direction would spice things up again.
azureninja18
2024-02-01 19:38:15 +0000 UTCKeep your passion and stick to your initial plan, you are the writer so just write the story you want to write. You are doing great !
Mamiko-san
2024-02-01 18:47:04 +0000 UTCI personally think Little Sister is one of your best series. I'm in two minds here. I'd like to see where the current series goes but if you do want to backtrack, I would say pick up from the end of 7. Either way, will still follow it :)
Alpha TG
2024-02-01 18:09:04 +0000 UTCI really like this series, even the last episodes were good. I look forward to many more episodes. The plot has now expanded to include a number of characters and I'm waiting to see how their paths will intertwine. And I'm really looking forward to Claire and Lan again and I hope they win in the end. :-)
Petr Zuty
2024-02-01 17:53:10 +0000 UTCI love the villian revenge angle. I thought it was the most popular of the stories... it is my favourite. Don't stop, it was getting interesting with a new twist upon a twist. I wish it could have even a 3rd faction figthing for the gun playing each other against one another.
neflah
2024-02-01 17:40:31 +0000 UTCI also really like the series and feel that you should continue it.
Manga360
2024-02-01 16:39:04 +0000 UTCI enjoy this series a lot. My suggestion is to just move it forward. Remember this is your creation do what you feel is best for it.
Busa
2024-02-01 16:13:48 +0000 UTCkeep going, I still like the series
seekerjf
2024-02-01 15:29:49 +0000 UTCI currently love the most recent works, but I am not really sure how you could end the story without it being kina abrupt.
rose
2024-02-01 13:50:41 +0000 UTCkeep your plan bro. that's enough
goodsen
2024-02-01 10:52:12 +0000 UTCI like the story, but the addition of new characters all the time, makes following along a bit more difficult. Despite that, I think it's one of your top 3.
Silly Pokes
2024-02-01 09:14:10 +0000 UTCI am a huge fan of Little sister series. I feel you should do what you find to be the best course of action. Furthermore I also believe if you feel that things get hard. I would suggest a break from just making comics for like a month or more so you also allow yourself a larger break.
Unknown9
2024-02-01 09:02:11 +0000 UTCI really liked the last chapters, but adding more characters slowed the pace of the story a bit. If you need to go back then go for it.
Meta
2024-02-01 09:01:24 +0000 UTC不管过程怎样,我只希望看到小妹妹赢
謝
2024-02-01 08:51:52 +0000 UTCI actually liked chapter 9 and 10, I love the whole 'Little Sister' story and would like to see it continuing. How you continue basically depends on what you plan then. In the first place I would opt for continuing the current storyline but since you said you would quickly bring it to an end, it would be kind of sad to me and I fear that such a quick end wouldn't be too good. On the other hand I wouldn't directly prefer 'going back to a previous chapter' and remaking some stuff, but if you go this way and plan to do more chapters instead of 'quickly bringing it to an end' it would also be fine. No matter which way you choose, I really liked to introduced plot with Juliana. It has quite some potential and I would like to see more of it. However, as others said there may be too much going on, too many main characters so I would tighten that a bit more. And I'm not sure how others think about that but the current plot driver 'Katherine takes everything and destroys the lifes of Nancy, Claire, etc.' is getting a bit annoying. I really would like to see a major change of plot direction again in one of the next chapters.
Glubschi43
2024-02-01 08:40:07 +0000 UTCI don't really know what the complaints are about. It's fine. I kind of miss Doris but new characters are ok too.
Jod McJod
2024-02-01 08:17:04 +0000 UTCI consider the Little Sister owning the best plot in all of your works, which have many transaction, but there are too much main character, which may increase the time and content for building the story. My detailed suggestion in following would tell you in Chinese which would be more clear and comprehensive. 1.对于您的第一个想法:回归之前的某个章节而言,会影响故事的完整性,原回来也比较麻烦,但是会使得主线可以变得比较简单,主要的团体就是美娜和妹妹的优劣势 也可以重新规划。 只要设计一个新的情节 突出或者暗示将两个团体的斗争引导到一方占优势,另一方妥协 应该可以有不错的效果 2. 对于您的第二个想法:保持现在的节奏快速结尾,也是可以的,但是会有一些角色没有交代背景,比如最后出现的男生为什么有皮 又得花比较多的章节去交代。我的建议是 可以考虑这个男的是妹妹团的人,这样可以缩减剧情,然后使得妹妹团翻身?然后也可以顺理成章的结尾 (PS: 可能您说过 你比较喜欢美娜,可是我个人作为读者可能偏向于喜欢妹妹的角色,可能这就是反响不太好的原因?!)
Zhiyuan NONG
2024-02-01 08:15:22 +0000 UTCI'm a fan of the series and I think you should go with whichever direction you think will make the best story, whether backtracking or continue with current. I'm slightly leaning towards keeping current story though
watermelon1024
2024-02-01 08:00:09 +0000 UTC我覺得9 10都很不錯勒 有伏筆 讓我很期待下一章的表現
LIAO PO JEN
2024-02-01 07:58:18 +0000 UTCPersonally, I'm more in favor of trying to keep the current story going and bring it to a end, though going back to a previous chapter also works as well, I would suggest to around post Chapter 7 or so,
Tommy
2024-02-01 07:54:28 +0000 UTCI’m personally not a huge fan of little sister. But I’m so curious to see where you’re going to take it!
Kawee
2024-02-01 07:54:26 +0000 UTC