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TUGB3 [Wip#26] Living throne and new shader

Nice chair , looks comfortable , not 399 tho .

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Agreeeeee

k5dash

Understood , thanks for the great feedbacks man . Leave rooms for reader's imagination , got it i'll work on this .

Thelewdcookie

First off: huge fan of your work. TL;DR: Blood won't ruin your scenes if used well. Leaving mystery and setting up a scene to let the reader draw their own implication/conclusion is smart and sexy. I feel like we're already way into the taboo territory. The gore takes it to another level. Your scenes are super tasteful and sexy, which is crazy given what's happening. I'd say, keep your work tasteful and elude to that kind of violence without actually going there--If you get what I'm saying. The reader's imagination will do a far better job at filling in the fantasy and your work won't stamped or reduced by it. For example in TUGB2, you end with a few really provocative scenes with the lines: "And once used up.... They become livestock." Blood was used in a good way there in my opinion. That left a dreadful feeling for me, but I enjoyed the experience. The implication is clear and the scenes elude to it. The reader's mind goes to those dark places on their own but the comic retains a sort of tasteful/sexy quality with a sense of mystery. If you want to work with fluid animations, I would recommend adding more coloration to the semen to make it more distinct and being strategic about where you include it.

Aaron

Man i should make a Discord server , so we can discuss random stuffs like this easier and more frequently

Thelewdcookie

So i'm working on the transition scenes where the gob brings them breeding sows back to their cave . And here is one of the tool they will use to carry the girls back , so a bit of blood won't ruin the scene eh ? since we're doing a non gore version i think it's best to let you guys decide . <a href="https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/15wyJtMv2Pv26Gif1-CPtni6sgGiySwSm?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/15wyJtMv2Pv26Gif1-CPtni6sgGiySwSm?usp=sharing</a>

Thelewdcookie

Glad u liked that shot man , took me a while and alot of concepts . Yes no worries there will be more scenes with the throne .

Thelewdcookie

Woah nice! The Living throne is such a wonderful idea. This is actually what I like the most. I love how the goboo leader demonstrate its superiority by literally sitting on those poor girls face. Their face impression is spot on, the moderate amount of rusty chain in the background also spice things up quite a bit. This set of picture makes me feel even more aroused than the meat shield scene, I rate it 10/10. Are you planning on making more shots on this scene? Really hope to see the full spectrum of the throne.

ayase

Okay i've fixed the hip , take a look guys (scroll down for them) which one looks better ?

Thelewdcookie

Yeah seems like i bent his hip too much , lemme fix it

Thelewdcookie

No I see it too.

M´ s Den of Lust and Desire

I dunno if it's just me but something seems off about the goblin's hips on the 2nd pic

Matteo.YB

Pregnancy and birth

VIC

Very soft chair indeed ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) .

Thelewdcookie

Emm…… How soft the “throne” is!

tangzhongtan


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