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next story spoilers & request work progress!



こんにちは、cold eyesの皆さん!

もうすぐ公開する作品と近況についてお知らせします~


現在リクエスト作業を最優先に進めており、FANBOXに公開予定の作品の一部を先行公開します!

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各位 cold eyes,大家好!

在这里向大家分享一下即将公开的作品和我的近况~


目前正在优先处理约稿,在这里提前和大家分享一些预定在FANBOX上公开的部分作品!

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Hello, cold eyes!

I'm here to share some news about my current and upcoming works~


I'm currently prioritizing requested works, and I'd like to share a sneak peek of some pieces that will be released on FANBOX!



Request manga - "Mai's last moments" [死因: strangle]


あるcold eyes様からのリクエストで、オリジナルキャラクターをstrangleしてほしいとのことでした。


彼女の名前はmaiで、スナッフ写真を扱うサイコパスによってstrangleされます…


彼女の詳しい背景は不明ですが、とても美しく魅力的な女性のようです。


そのためか、モデルや撮影の提案を受けたのでしょうか?真夜中のホテルの部屋で、彼女は結局、無残に殺される予定です…


男の仲間たちは朝まで彼女の体を使い、夜が明けてからようやく体を拭いて片付けるようです…

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约稿漫画 - "Mai's last moments" [死因: 绞杀]


这是一位cold eyes的原创角色,要求被绞杀的约稿。


她的名字是mai,她将被一个贩卖虐杀照片的变态杀人魔绞杀…


虽然不清楚她的具体背景,但看起来她是一位非常美丽动人的女性。


所以才收到了模特或拍摄的邀约吗?深夜,在酒店房间里,她最终将凄惨地死去…


男人的同伙们会一直玩弄她的身体直到天亮,等天亮了才会帮她擦拭和收拾…

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Request manga - "Mai's last moments" [Cause of death: strangle]


This is a request from one of our 'cold eyes' to strangle their original character.


Her name is Mai, and she will be strangled by a psychopath who deals in snuff photos...


Not much is known about her background, but she appears to be a very beautiful and attractive woman.



Maybe that's why she received a modeling or photoshoot offer? Late at night, in a hotel room, she is fated to die a miserable death...


The man's colleagues will use her body until the morning, only cleaning her up when the sun rises...


Request manga - "eirika's last moments" [死因: 心臓貫通、過多出血]


こちらは、あるcold eyes様からリクエストいただいた「ファイアーエムブレム」の二次創作漫画です!

「ファイアーエムブレム」に登場するエイリークが主人公です。


私は「ファイアーエムブレム」をプレイしたことがないので、様々な映像や資料を探して簡単に勉強しました!


彼女は「ルネス王国」という国の王女でしたが、「グラド帝国」の侵攻によって国を失い、逃げてきたのです。


物語は「グラド帝国」の残党の視点で進みます。


旅行中だった彼女を発見した「グラド帝国」の兵士たちは、彼女を拉致します。


その後、何か神聖な儀式の生贄として彼女を捧げるため、魔法陣で拘束。


素手で胸を突き破って心臓を取り出し、死に至らしめます。


その後、彼女の体は人形のようにボロボロになるでしょう............悲しいです....

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约稿漫画 - "eirika's last moments" [死因: 心脏贯穿、过度失血]


这是某位cold eyes约稿的《火焰之纹章》二次创作漫画!

主角是《火焰之纹章》中的登场角色——艾瑞珂。


因为我没有玩过《火焰之纹章》,所以通过查找各种视频和资料简单地学习了一下!


她曾是“鲁内斯王国”的公主,但因“格拉多帝国”的侵略而国破家亡,逃了出来。


故事以“格拉多帝国”残党的视角展开。


“格拉多帝国”的士兵们发现了正在旅行的她,并绑架了她。


之后,为了将她作为某种神圣仪式的祭品,用魔法阵束缚了她。


用手掏出她的心脏,致其死亡。


之后,她的身体会像玩偶一样变得破烂不堪吧............好伤心....

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Request manga - "eirika's last moments" [Cause of death: heart penetration, exsanguination]


This is a "Fire Emblem" fan comic requested by one of our 'cold eyes'!

The protagonist is Eirika from "Fire Emblem".


I've never played "Fire Emblem" myself, so I did some light research by watching videos and looking up materials!


She was the princess of a country called the "Kingdom of Renais," but she lost her nation to an invasion by the "Gradonian Empire" and fled.


The story is told from the perspective of the remnants of the Gradonian Empire.


Gradonian soldiers find her during her travels and kidnap her.


They then bind her in a magic circle to offer her as a sacrifice for some kind of sacred ritual.


They pierce her chest with their bare hands, pull out her heart, and kill her.


Afterward, her body will be left tattered like a doll............ So sad....


Request manga - "kalse's last moments" [死因: 心臓貫通、過多出血]


こちらは、あるcold eyes様からリクエストいただいた、現在サービス終了したモバイルゲーム「メルクストーリア」の二次創作漫画リクエストです。

彼女はこのゲームの中でもあまり知られていないキャラクターで、ご存知の方は少ないかもしれません。


彼女の情報を調べるために多くの努力をしました。彼女は本当に愛らしく、可愛い体つきをしています。



kalseは「Electric Country」所属の学生です。

彼女は師匠である「Radstor」に別れを告げた後、自分の国を離れて遠い旅に出ますね...



そんなkalseの初デビュー、見知らぬ冒険者たちとパーティーを組むことになりましたが、その冒険者たちは腹黒い下劣な冒険者たちだったようです....

kalseがモンスターに致命傷を負うようにわざと放置した後、瀕死状態の彼女の体をめちゃくちゃに利用します。

結局、死んだ後もめちゃくちゃにされ続けます.....

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约稿漫画 - "kalse's last moments" [死因: 心脏贯穿、过度失血]


这是某位cold eyes约稿的,关于现已停止运营的手游《梅露可物语》的二次创作漫画。

她是这款游戏中一个比较冷门的角色,可能认识她的人不多。


为了找到她的资料,我花了很多心思。她真的非常可爱,身材也很棒。



kalse是“电气之国”的一名学生。

她和她的老师“Radstor”告别后,离开了自己的国家,踏上了遥远的旅途…



kalse的初次冒险,和不认识的冒险者们组了队,但那些冒险者似乎是些阴险的败类…。

他们故意让kalse被怪物击受重伤,然后肆意玩弄她濒死的身体。

结果死后也被继续弄得乱七八糟.....


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Request manga - "kalse's last moments" [Cause of death: heart penetration, exsanguination]


This is a fan comic request for "Merc Storia," a mobile game that has now ended its service, from one of our 'cold eyes'.

She is a rather obscure character in the game, so I don't think many of you know her.



I put a lot of effort into finding information about her. She has a really lovely and cute figure.



kalse is a student from the "Electric Country".

After saying goodbye to her master, "Radstor," she leaves her country to embark on a long journey...



For her debut, kalse forms a party with some adventurers she doesn't know, but it seems they were a group of vile, lecherous adventurers....

They intentionally let a monster fatally wound kalse, and then they take advantage of her dying body.

And they continue to mess her up even after she dies.....


Request manga - "the Detective girl's last moments"


*この作品は、すべての画像が普段の作品とは違って完全に服を着た状態である特別な漫画です。


そのため、FANBOXに公開するかはまだ悩んでいます…!でも、とてもおいしい作品なので悩みますね~


こちらは、あるcold eyes様からリクエストいただいたオリジナルキャラクターの漫画リクエストです!

すごいスタイルの刑事さんが主人公です。物語は彼女の後輩警察官の視点で進みます。


後輩の警察官は、彼女のさっぱりした性格と、時々無防備に見える黒いブラをいつもいやらしく眺めています。


ところがある日、彼女が作戦中に死亡したという知らせが入り、犯罪集団が撮影した最後のスナッフフィルムの中で彼女の姿を発見しますね..... この作品はすべてのシーンが服を着た状態で、少し特別な感じの作品になりそうです~

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约稿漫画 - "the Detective girl's last moments"


※这部作品和以往的作品不同,所有画面都是穿着衣服的,是一部比较特别的漫画。


所以我还在犹豫要不要在FANBOX上公开…!但因为作品很香,所以很苦恼~


这是一位cold eyes约稿的原创角色漫画!

主角是一位身材超棒的刑警。故事以她的后辈警官的视角展开。


后辈警官总是垂涎于她爽朗的性格和偶尔不设防时露出的黑色文胸。


然而有一天,传来了她在作战中牺牲的消息,后辈在犯罪集团拍摄的最后的虐杀影片中,发现了她的身影..... 这部作品所有场景都是穿着衣服的,感觉会是一部感觉很特别的作品~

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Request manga - "the Detective girl's last moments"


*This is a special manga where, unlike my usual works, all scenes are fully clothed.



That's why I'm still debating whether to release it on FANBOX...! But it's a very tempting piece, so it's a tough decision~


This is a manga request for an original character from one of our 'cold eyes'!

The protagonist is a detective with an amazing body. The story is told from her junior officer's perspective.


The junior officer has always lustfully admired her easy-going personality and the black bra that he often glimpses when she's off-guard.


Then one day, news arrives that she died during an operation, and he finds her in a final snuff film shot by the criminal group..... All scenes in this work are fully clothed, so it should have a unique feel~



Request? - "the sister girl"


これは少し特別なリクエストでして、リクエストしてくださったCGでビジュアルノベルゲームを作られるそうです。


そのため、fanboxには公開しないかもしれませんが、ひとまず制作中なのでニュースをお届けしたかったです!


小さな村の愛らしいsister girlが主人公で、彼女はある陰謀に巻き込まれ、生贄として捧げられてしまいます...


魔法で生成された触手が眠っている彼女を苦しめ、眠ったまま死に至らせるでしょう...



どこで公開されるかは分かりませんが、いつか公開される彼女の物語を楽しみにしていてください....

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约稿? - "the sister girl"


这个约稿有点特别,约稿人说要用约稿的CG制作视觉小说游戏。


所以可能不会在fanbox上公开,但因为正在制作中,所以想和大家分享一下这个消息!


主角是小村庄里可爱的“sister girl”,她被卷入一场阴谋,最终被当作祭品献上…


魔法生成的触手会在她沉睡时折磨她,让她在睡梦中死去…


虽然不知道会在哪里公开,但请大家期待她未来会被公开的故事吧....


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Request? - "the sister girl"


This is a slightly special request; the client said they're making a visual novel game with the commissioned CGs.


For that reason, it might not be released on Fanbox, but I wanted to share the news since it's in production!


The protagonist is a lovely "sister girl" from a small town, who gets caught up in a conspiracy and ends up being offered as a sacrifice...


Magically generated tentacles will torment her in her sleep, causing her to die while still sleeping...



I'm not sure where it will be released, but please look forward to her story, which will be revealed someday....


※ 今後の計画


まず、来週中にリクエストの仕上げとfanboxの公開を終える予定で、その後は引き続きオリジナル作品の制作を進めていきたいと思います!

予定通りなら「Lilly」の漫画を描くべきですが、アイデアがなかなか浮かばなくて... 他の漫画を先に進めるかもしれません!


うーん…「ArmedJK」のテーマをもう一度やってみましょうか?



とにかく、オリジナル漫画は何を描くか決まったら、またネタバレ記事を投稿しますね~


いつもありがとうございます!!!


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※ 之后的计划


首先,预计下周内完成约稿并上传到fanbox。之后会继续进行原创作品的创作!

按计划应该画“Lilly”的漫画,但没什么灵感… 可能会先画别的漫画!


嗯…要不再画一次“ArmedJK”主题?



总之,等决定好画哪个原创漫画后,会再发一篇剧透帖的~


一直以来非常感谢大家!!!


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※ Future Plans


First, I plan to finish the requests and release them on Fanbox by next week. After that, I will continue working on my original projects!

The plan was to work on "Lilly's" manga, but I'm having trouble coming up with ideas... So I might work on a different manga first!


Hmm... Maybe I'll do the "ArmedJK" theme one more time?



Anyway, once I decide which original manga to work on, I'll post another spoiler update~


Thank you always!!!

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hehehehehehe, i agree with your opinion! i want to try drawing more blood in a sexy way🥰😊 and of course, i'll be upgrade the other parts too, based on improved natyz now! emma is a character who's getting remade for the third time now (after guild girl and faded truth), so i really want to make her story compelling and not boring. so i'm being careful about spoiling her story! i have some plots in mind right now, but i'll share them when they're a bit more concrete! hehehehe i'm going to make a story that many people, including you, can enjoy!😘😉😉😉🥰 and it's heart rip guy's birthday soon, so i'll be drawing a heart soon, and i'll try to incorporate your idea and tasty too~ and of course, for the future emma as well~

natyz

It's ok, I understand you want to confirm the details of the story before post it, but it's a pity that I didn't see Emma's part🥲😂🥺In addition to Lilly, I am also looking forward to Emma's story🥺🥰If you have any ideas for Emma's new story, pls let me know🥰I have already started to imagine Emma's look by your current style🥰For Emma, I have some new suggestion now, I hope that when Emma's heart is ripped out, she bleeds as much as in old work. In fact, I hope that the girl who get hurt in the chest or the girl whose heart is dug out has a larger amount of blood loss, the bloodiness can also be beautiful🥰I said I like the look of Emma on page 10 of Faded truth 2 because her posture, but the blood on her body makes her more beautiful. I also love the expression of blood in your painting🥰I also hope that Emma's face will be a little whiter after her death, at least not with blush like before. People who died of massive blood loss should have a pale face🥰or like Lilly's look🥰

Brodonlor

oh, i wrote a comment about emma again and then deleted it! hehehehhehheheehe, sorry about that! the story isn't set in stone yet, so i'm being careful about spoilers! i woke up and read your message carefully and saved it 🥰🥰🥰🥰 i'll use the message you left as a reference to continue working on the next project! thanks for sooo many kind words hehehe i will remember feedbacks too! i'm still working out the details for emma's story so i'm not sure how it will turn out, but i'll work hard to prepare it so you can see the existing characters again in a good way! thank youu🥰🥰🥰🥰

natyz

Your message is not a bother at all! I think I was just feeling a lot of pressure from my recent work, so I was a bit worn out, hehehe. I'm so relieved and happy that you like it🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 This project was really tough, but I learned so much from it! I'll keep working hard!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😇😇😇😇

natyz

Keep working but care of your healthy, I always support you, you know it🥰🥰🥰

Brodonlor

I'll post a full comment when I can, but I wanted to tell you first that I think Kalse's work is soooooooooo great, even though I don't know the game, I still think you draw a lovely girl😍🥰

Brodonlor

I always did it🥰Will my long comments bother you? If you are tired, you can reply later. Don't worry, the comments are always there, me and other readers is same too. I hope my comments can make you happy and inspired, not make you tired😭🥺And I always believe that you are doing your best, and that has never changed🥰like your new work,the girl's expression and skin texture are better, especially the expression is more vivid🥰and the lines are indeed complete🥰I'm sure everyone will think you're making progress and you're really did it all the time🥰If I have more free time, I will continue to post long comments of the new characters in future. I still have the many I want to say about Yua, Fern, Yoshino and Airi, I even have something to say about Noa's last work🥰and now there is one more, lovely Kalse🥰

Brodonlor

OHHHH!!! Thank you very much BROBROBRODONLOR!!! I will looking forward to it

bloody painter

The new upload is coming soon, but I got so much feedback that··· I was a little exhausted when I wrote my last comment. So I deleted it and wrote a new one with a clearer head! I think I also revealed too many spoilers about future works that aren't even set in stone yet. Hehehe.. and 10:00PM comming new manga I'm about to upload will be drastically different. I spent more than twice the usual time just on the line art, and poured my soul into the base colors to make sure there were no smudges or gaps. also body lines yeah your noticed! I'm always grateful for your feedback, and I'm truly trying my best···! I just hope you understand that. TwT😭😇😇😇💛hehehehehehe

natyz

Class is make me tried😐Health?Not dead means healthy for me(no way😂)I play Starfield and other games this month, Starfield mostly, and Ratatan, a indie game, The sequel to my childhood game, Kings of glory, a mobile moba game from my country but it always has controversy and criticism😐As an aside, natyz is going to draw Emma, ​​with your favorite heart ripped😂I gave him the inspiration, just wait😂

Brodonlor

And I saw you deleted 1 comment?Is there some problem? I glanced at it, but when I looked at it again you deleted it🤔😂

Brodonlor

I really love Lilly's look on page 10, In this page, Lilly's figure is completely like the really plump character, especially her thighs and butt😍🥰But her waist is too thin in the first few pages🥺I hope to see better characters with fuller bodies in the future. The suggestions are for all huge breast characters, including Yua, Cecilia, etc🥺That’s all for now. I’ll post a more detailed comment of Lilly later🥰

Brodonlor

I see, but I forgot something I want to say, And do you remember I said that Yui and Airi's waists were too thin in Assault 3? I hope you can pay attention to this in future. I looked at your previous works again and it seems that you made the waists thinner and thinner, The waist is too thin, which makes the body proportion a bit unbalanced🥺The current waistline, when put together with the genitals, it like inverted triangle, but the character has huge breasts🤔🥺The character's waist looks like it could be easily broken🥺I think the waistline is straighter like in your early works, which makes it look more normal, especially for characters with huge breasts🥺It would be better for fuller characters to have fuller figures, In addition to the waist, the thighs are also need to improved. I hope to see improvements🥺

Brodonlor

brodonlor, thank youuu!! 😇😇😇😇😇😇💛 ahhh i'm sorry i haven't had the time to properly check your comment yet 😂 i'll upload the new piece and then read it carefully...! for this work, i've tried to completely improve the quality right from the lineart stage, reflecting your feedback, so please look forward to the new piece for now! continue the story about lilly or emma,yua after i new upload it 🥰🥰

natyz

There there *Hugs Natyz tightly and pats your head to comfort you🤗🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊* Don't push or stress yourself too hard I already told you many times already why won't you listen Natyz chan. Because you stress and push yourself too hard that why this situation happened so if you don't want to make the history repeat itself again you have too take care a lot of yourself don't pressure, stress or push yourself too hard because if you do that too much you will get sick and me and the other cold eyes will have to wait for a long long time again. So Natyz chan please take care of yourself and your health don't forget to take rest and don't push yourself too hard and please Remember your health and safety come first🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊 Here let's me hugs and comfort you *Hugs Natyz tightly and pats your head to comfort you🤗🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊* With Love From Your Lovely Heart Ripped Guy

bloody painter

thanks uaaaaaaaa please hug me 😭😭😭🤗🤗🤗🤗💛 i make my manga hoping my cold eyes can have a happy masturbate time. but it's so stressful when it's not sexy or tasty enough for that to happen. sometimes i want to just scrap it all and start over, but i can't make my cold eyes wait too long... that's been happening a lot lately, so it's been really tough 😭

natyz

Oh so you get the medicine and feel better now that good!! keep doing that until it completely heal May I know what put you so much under stress please? If you would kindly tell me and also do you like my pats and hugs? With Love From Your Lovely Heart Ripped Guy

bloody painter

thank you for your kind words ;_; oh, i'm already taking medicine! do you remember when i took a break a while ago saying i had to go to the hospital? now much better compared to then! hehe but i think it's because i've been under so much stress lately ;_; sooo hard days...

natyz

Also about your sickness especially your gastritis that is still causing digestive issues...I think you really should go to doctor and cure it fix the sickness Natyz chan. Because if you not dealing with it early it will become deadly and really too late to heal it if you let it stay for too long so please go to the doctor and let the cure your gastritis that still causing digestive issues...so we don't have to worry about your health and it might even be your gastritis that is the cause of your weak body and sickness. So please be concern more about yourself and take care a lot more about yourself Natyz chan I really worried about your health With Love From Your Lovely Heart Ripped Guy

bloody painter

Don't push yourself too hard Natyz chan just keep yourself healthy so you can stay with us for a long long time as for my birthday it ok to be late so don't rush yourself or the work quality will be drop. You can just congratulate me on my birthday first I already know that you have a gift for me so even if it finish next month it ok because I know and understand that you wholeheartly make this for me that already enough for me to wait for the work so don't feel overwhelmed you can do what you already planned on your schedule so you feel relaxed and not worried and overwhelmed. If it finished after my birthday you don't have to feel guilty you can just add more heart ripped in the future that all lol and don't feel sad and deject everyone here is there for you and we cheering on you Natyz so KEEP FIGHTING!!!! YOU ARE THE BEST!!! I'M HERE FOR YOU!!! *Hugs Natyz tightly and pats your head to comfort you* Love From your lovely Heart Ripped Guy

bloody painter

i'm sorry, my heart rip guy ;_; i've been having a tough time lately. i wasn't happy with my work, so i've been redoing a lot of it. because of that, i haven't been feeling well, and my gastritis is still causing digestive issues... anyway, what i meant to say was that i've definitely improved the quality of this comic, and i'm confident it turned out even more appealing than originally planned. as soon as this is uploaded, i'm going to start the rough sketches for the very next piece...! i have several ideas, so i meant that i'll be providing more new content more faster that means ;_; but to be honest, this project dragged on so long that my schedule is a complete mess. the road ahead feels a bit daunting, but... i have to keep working hard... and i wanted to upload the heart rip comic for your birthday, but there's not much time left, so i'm a bit worried about that... but..... UAAAAAAAA sooo overwhelmed but... ;_; you know....

natyz

BTW Natyz chan I have some questions what do you mean by more frequent uploads for the Fanbox? Can you please explain it more clearly please? It kinda very vague and not clear like fansky one that will get an extra piece of work as an apology. And another question please don't think too much or take it seriously it just my rambling I'msorry if it make you feel bad or uncomfortable. What I want to ask is How did you know that you manga, the manga has been aged to perfection? I don't want to get my hope up high and be very sad and disappointed again. Because it might be in the same situation as Erika from fire emblem case that I said before in that post and I know that your work is really good so far and I shouldn't be picky but I'm so sorry but I have to be skeptical about this sentence that you said "the manga has been aged to perfection" so I hope that it would be true to your word that "the manga has been aged to perfection" I really hope so Love From your lovely Heart Ripped Guy

bloody painter

Natyz chan you finally back!!!! I worried that something might happened to you because you dissappear from almost 2 weeks!!! Is your body just really weak or you are seriously ill because you push yourself? Also may I know what happened to you? Did you sick because of high fever, a cold or something else so I might give you an advice on how to get better and did you go to the doctor? Did you take the medicine? How are you now? Is the sickness all gone? Sorry for asking so many questions but I'm really worried about you because you dissappear for too long I hope you understand Love From your lovely heart ripped guy

bloody painter

Let's write to here for now. I haven't started writing Lilly's review yet. I just wrote a summary in Chinese🥺There are already a lot of comments above I send. I am afraid of disturbing your rest, you can just read these first and I will send you a comment after a while🥺Be sure to take more rest🥺

Brodonlor

And Kenta takes Yua to the bathroom to wash her body. It's a pity that there is no picture of Yua's whole body being wet. I hope to draw Yua's look after being washed by Kenta. I also hope to have a picture of Kenta playing her body, such as kneading her breasts(Kenta said he want to grab Yua's huge breasts, but unfortunately there is no such picture😭🥺), or reaching out to pull her tongue to play with it, oral sex😍🥺I think you don't need to draw it from the beginning, just start from when Kenta grabs Yua's neck. Airi and Yua are arguably my favorite characters after Noa, but I feel that Yua's performance is a bit regrettable🥺🥺

Brodonlor

I hope that if you draw Yua again in the future, you can draw the suffocation process better and the process of using the body after death🥺And I really hope you will draw Yua's expression after she suffocated to death the same as Azusa you drew. Azusa's expression is more consistent with the expression of most suffocation works, more realistic and I like it more😍🥰The girl rolls her eyes or half-closes , sticks out her tongue, drools and tears, this is the most erotic expression that can truly show the characteristics of death by suffocation and the pain before death😍🥰I always thought it was a pity that Yua didn't have this expression after her death😭😭🥺

Brodonlor

Let's get back to the topic, I hope you will pay more attention to the hands and ears in the future, assault 3 is your best work so far, but the hands and ears have become rough again, which is a pity. When Airi struggles, only the line drawing of the hands is too conspicuous. I hope the overall level of detail in the picture is the same, if you need more time to draw, I can wait🥺And about Yua, I like her image design, but the lines of this work seem too rough. I can even see the lines of different shades. Even if I don't know about drawing, I can tell where you started when you drew the lines😐😂I guess you were a bit rushed when you finished this work?🤔🥺I hope you will pay attention to this in your future works🥺And the painful process and expression of Yua's death by suffocation are not well expressed🥺

Brodonlor

And I will also say some problems of other works at once, I can only open my computer to write long comments when my family is not at home😭🥺But I still can't write about my feelings about the works themselves, such as what I like about these works. It's too long and I've been a little tired recently. First, I went to class, and then I couldn't find a job to earn tuition. I was also mentally exhausted. Chatting with you is always so happy for me, but my poor English makes it take me longer and more energy to translate, so I lose motivation sometime🥺The real life is not easy for everyone. I think I am lucky to see your work and know you😭🥺🥺just want you can know it, Sometimes I don't reply because of family at home or I'm too tired after class and done other things, pls forgive me😭🥺

Brodonlor

And your early works just have short page, be they also contain many lovely images for dead girls🥰For example, someone held Emma's head and let she face her heart after she is dead🥰And the first work you released, Emma's chest injured and being raped before her death, that's so great😍🥰I hope these scene can be remake to new work, you can do some minor changes, not exactly the same, after all, it is not just a simple redo of an old work🥰

Brodonlor

I'm here again, I want to know more about Emma!🥰I am looking forward about Emma's return, do you have any ideas to rewrite Emma's story?In addition to what I suggested before🥰Was she killed and used like the other girls, or was she resurrected by Loren like the original story?I stiil hope it will be a Emma's story afterward🥰hope Emma will be have a longer story and she finally rests in peace after her was true death🥰🥺and the body must be left for someone to enjoy one last time of course😂😈😈😈I think the story even can be connected to the story of Yuna or other characters🥰Like I said before, let Cale taking over the corpse of Riese and Emma🥰

Brodonlor

cold eyesの皆さん、長らくお待たせしました! 私は日曜日に復帰する予定です! 皆さんに最高のtastyな漫画をお届けしたくて、その間、体調を崩しながら少しずつ修正を重ねて…毎日修正して…少し苦悩していたら時間がかかってしまいました ;_; その分、美味しく熟成された漫画になっているはずです。楽しみにしていてください! 長い間お待たせしてしまい、本当に申し訳ありません。fansky購入者の皆様には追加で作品をもう一つ提供し、fanbox支援者の皆様には、より頻繁なアップロードでお応えします! 休ませてくれて、理解してくれて本当にありがとうございます…! 日曜の夜、おそらく午後10:00頃に会いましょ!

natyz

各位 cold eyes,久等了!! 我准备在这周日回归! 我一心想为大家带来最 tasty的漫画,但期间因为生病,只能一点点地修改… 每天都在改… 苦恼了许久,所以才花了些时间 ;_; 但也正因如此,这将会是一部酝酿得恰到好处的漫画,敬请期待!让大家等了这么久,真的非常抱歉。为了补偿大家,我会为 fansky的购买者们追加一部作品,也会为fanbox的赞助者们带来更频繁的更新! 真的非常感谢大家让我休息,也谢谢你们的理解…!我们周日晚上见!大概是晚上10:00!

natyz

To all my cold eyes, thank you so much for your patience!! I'm planning to come back this Sunday japan timezone! I wanted to serve you the absolute tasty manga, but I got sick and was tweaking things a little... and then editing every single day... It took a while because I was struggling a bit ;_; but that just means the manga has been aged to perfection. please look forward to it! I'm truly sorry for making you wait so long. as a my apology, I'll be providing an extra piece of work for fansky purchasers, and I'll reward my fanbox cold eyes with more frequent uploads! Thank you so much for letting me rest and for your understanding...! I'll be back on Sunday night! Probably around 10:00 PM!

natyz

hehehehehehehehehehehe ok

bloody painter

yeah! And sry ;_; , I haven't been logging into FB lately. it seems like I missed two of your messages. As for my ID, it's just the painful struggle of someone who doesn't know how to name himself. hehehehehehehehehehehe

113225

No need to say sorry, healthy is important for everyone, you should rest these time🥺Maybe you can ask the requester to wait a little longer🥺I believe they will understand for your body problems🥺never to rush, don't let stress and healthy problems overwhelm you, slow down🥺we are always here🥺

Brodonlor

I think I'll probably draw Emma next! but I don't have a definite plan yet. I've been having bad headaches and feeling unwell every day lately, so I don't have much time to work 😭😭 I'm also trying to fix the oversized head issue in my drawings, so I'm re-drawing a few scenes 😭 This isn't just a problem in kalse chan but in my requset works too, so there's a lot to rework. But with my poor health and headaches, I barely have time to work... I'm going crazy.. 😭 I have to finish everything by Wednesday to get the requset and fanbox uploads done. I'm so short on time and my body hurts so much 😭😭😭 I'll reply properly once I get these things sorted out! 😭 I'm so sorry 😭😭😭

natyz

Oh, ok fighting!!! BROBROBRODONLOR also how are you? What about your health and what game are you playing?🥰😘☺️😊

bloody painter

Is that so?😂You can't expect someone who is not good at English to tell what country an English speaker is from😂But maybe we can talk later. In reality, I am still a little tired from attending classes. I played games mostly in my free time, especially on Saturdays and Sundays🥺

Brodonlor

Ahhh I played Starfield and another games after class these week🥺I have 8 hours of classes every Friday, and a typhoon caused two days of classes is cancel, I need to make up some cancelled classes for some days😭and I have some homework every week, what a poor and busy man😭maybe I will send all comments of the characters I haven't talk about in future, like Yua🥺but my next reply should be about Lilly first🥰Maybe i will send it on Christmas😭🥺Maybe we've just be chatting simple🥺I'd like to know if you have any ideas for your next work and which one will you draw first🥰

Brodonlor

113225 may I ask why your name is a number do they have any meanings behind it and whatĥĥ should I called you? Do you have a nickname? Also how are you? Can we be friend?🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️😘😘😘😀😃😄😁😆😍😍😋

bloody painter

heheheheheheehehe😊😊😊😘thanks!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ;_;

natyz

take care!and take ur time,life matters above all.have a nice day guys

ALIENLEMON

hehhehehehehehehe😭😭😭😭😭😭😭thank youuuuuu🥰🥰🥰🥰yeah!! ;_; i will work while ensuring my health hehehe...!!

natyz

Take care😭😭😭We will always be here. I've been very interested in this character. Perhaps because of her cute appearance and a bit of the attribute of armed JK?heheheheheheehhehehehehehehe🥰. Plz also work while ensuring your health😭

113225

Now get some rest and take care of yourself Natyz!!!! This is the decree of the Demon king of heart The Heart Ripped Guy!!! And you have to follow it😤😤😤😤 Love From your lovely heart ripped guy

bloody painter

uuuuuuuuuuuuah thank youuuuuu ;_; heehehe🥰😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏

natyz

It's ok do it when you free now rush no pressure Natyz chan please take care of yourself and your health don't forget to take rest and don't push yourself too hard and please Remember your health and safety come first🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰😊😊 Love From your Lovely heart ripped guy

bloody painter

everyone, i'm so sorry ;_; it looks like i'll need a little more time to finish kalse chan's comic. my health isn't very good right now, so i think i need to work a bit more slowly ;_; ugh, please forgive my weak body... her story is in progress and will be 14+ pages, and i've redrawn all the preview images too! i've also included the some tasty ideas that cold eyes recommended before...(living state peeing..~?) and she will be redrawn to be cuter and more loli-like! i'm sure it's going to be a very tasty comic, just please wait a little longer... just a few more days! ;_; this time, i've packed in a lot of dense dialogue for the characters, so you'll find a new flavor in the text as well! anyway, i'll try to get some rest while working. ugh, my headache is so bad... ;_;

natyz

Uhhh...bro Ackchyually Actually ☝️ 🤓 I'm also Asian that live in SEA 🌊 too you know lol🥺😂 Do I look like European that much? Lol and it ok you comment is like a critic that provides ideas and insights it not that you will alway ranting about how much you love like like big boobs girl anyways lol 😅😆🤣😂😅😆🤣😂😅😆😂😂🤣😅😆😂 Right?

bloody painter

And all lower classes people have some worry in their life. This is not a problem of a particular country, every country will have the same problem, There are also people living in poverty in developed countries, even to facing different social problem, and China is my motherland after all. I hope you understand. Also, I want to say one more thing, I don’t want to say any politics. If you never plan to talk about it, then ignore what I say. About the chat, I will reply you as I can. Thanks for not disliking my long and long comment which almost occupies the comment page🥺😂

Brodonlor

East Asia is not an English-speaking region. China has its own huge society and civilization, a world different from yours. Chinese or East Asians learn English in order to integrate into the world, but we can choose to continue to do local work and don't need to contact with English speakers, so there is no need to learn English specifically. This is just a compulsory course for us from primary school to secondary school, but it may not be useful when we enter society. After all, we are not part of the English-speaking region in Europe and America, and most people do not have language talent. However, I go to learn English again because I want to talk to natyz, you and other painter,my course also has English classes, but it is for professional English. I still using translater to write comments and modify the words myself. The limit of language and border have been broken. I rarely feel the positive feelings brought to me by the Internet☺️🥰

Brodonlor

Yeah, I understand I heard that live in China is very tiring and they don't use English very often too so fighting brobrobro I'm cheering for you 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘

bloody painter

NOW I FEEL UNLIMITED POWWAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! LOL 😂😂😂😂😂😂 Natyz how are you? and also brobrobro also

bloody painter

hehehehheheheheehehhe yeah~🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰i will!

natyz

I see, and our tastes are really similar🥰but I have something I forget to say, it still aboit the details of Lilly's story, I will send it tomorrow, wait for me🥰and tkank you again for your patience to me😭🥺🥰

Brodonlor

It's tiring to write comment in non-native language, and one more thing, when I have time, I want to see something my interest or just play games, it's tiring for me to post such a long comment to natyz, The systems in the East and the West are different, so it is harder for me to say what I am studying now🥺😐I can only say that it's about the digital media and it's not a university course. I'm also worried about my future in real life. Natyz's work is excellent and he's friendly and patient. So even though I'm tired after class, I still want to send him a long comment and chat to him. But I can't speak to every English speaker for that long. My English is so poor that it takes a long time for me to translate it myself, sorry😐🥺I have more want to say with natyz, maybe next time?😐

Brodonlor

O MG 1 0 0 comment ??????????????????hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahhah👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁

natyz

wow, your love for Lilly is amazing! hahahahah Thank you so much 🥰🥰🥰🥰 I really like a sad story. sooooo sad, and I love the eros and sexiness within those terribly sad stories. I think we have very similar tastes. Thank you so much for always taking the time to write me messages. Yes, of course! I always organize the precious advice you give me into a txt file and use it as a reference for my next work. However, I can't apply every single element, so only some of it might actually be used, but I'm always trying my best! hehehehe... Thank you for always being so understanding! 🥰 The opinions of my cold eyes are always precious. I believe that communication outside of the work itself can also add to the enjoyment of the story! riese chan... lilly chan... They are all characters I love, so I'm looking forward to the remake~and will be more breast grab too~

natyz

Also is there anywhere we can talk? That not this? Or is it hard because of different time zones and each other life different schedules

bloody painter

AND THIS IS THE 100TH COMMENT OF THIS POST!!!! I MANAGED TO BE THE FIRST TO CLAIMED IT MYSELF WOOOOOO!!!!! YEAH!!! BABY THAT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR, THAT'S WHAT IT'S ALL ABOUT!!! LOL😆😅🤣😂😂😂🤣😅😆👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀🫀👁👁👁👁👁

bloody painter

Ummm🤔🤔🧐🧐 new Alias for me I see, I like it thank you BROBROBRODONLOR and who disturb me? That the answer I don't know myself that why I'm asking you lol😅🤣😂😆 it might be YOU!!!! Or Natyz chan or pixie or someone else or anyone tho lol 👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀🫀👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁👁

bloody painter

You can also talk to me bro, even tho I might not be an expert, active and expressive like you two but I'm still here waiting for heart ripped and chatting lol😅😆🤣😂, also I'm going to support Natyz chan this month too!! And finally I will finally be free from the curse of the night in next week aka finish my night shift work for this month and do it next month only for 2 days only then back to afternoon and morning shift. Also how are you BROBROBRODONLOR may I ask what did you study that it take 8 hours straight? If it not bother you and your privacy

bloody painter

Hello there, who disturbed you, the demon Kingl of heart?🫀just tell us who did it, we will go to cut their heart out🫀😈😂

Brodonlor

And, wow, I never thought you would save my comments to txt😯🥰Seeing how much you value my words, I really don't know what can I say. I still want to thank you as before😭🥺🥰Did you also write down my earlier suggestion about Lilly and the other characters as well?🥰You really surprised me🥰I don't know how to say, I am so happy to be your important advice provider or even online chat friend , even we are just chatting on the web🥰😭I am very moved to see your work and talk with you. I am really grateful to you. I can temporarily put aside the real life troubles in your place to appreciate your work and talk with you, I can't say it anymore as I want to cry now😭😭😭😭this is really important to me😭🥺I hope we can keep chatting like this in future😭🥺Finally, I still wish your works will get better and better, and that your real life will be swell than mine😭🥺If you still have any words want to say, I am here always, just chatting makes me feel good😭🥺

Brodonlor

but someone put his hand to grab her breasts, it made me think about it. Maybe she will have the same fate as Cecilia or Lilly? A story about being bought by someone and becoming a plaything like them🤔🥺Even if she is not born noble, she is still a beauty among thousands, and she will be popular🥰Maybe we could write about her in the morgue, let Cale read her memories, see the whole process of her being raped and killed, or even let Cale do something to her... you know🥰I also look forward to see the full story of Riese after your painting skills improve😍🥰

Brodonlor

Talk about Lilly make me to think of Riese, she is also very beautiful like I said before🥰I still look forward to her new work, I remember I gave my detailed suggestions before🥰Riese can be taken away by a boy to enjoy a night of themself, and you can draw some romantic scenes that you have never drawn before🥰But I just had a new idea. In the last Riese pic you posted for Nobless Fallen 1, when she was put into the body bag, Riese was also very beautiful with her hair loose🥰With her hair hanging down to her shoulders, she has a different kind of beauty. She seems to have grown up a little. It makes people imagine what she will look like in a few years. She must be a great beauty woman🥰🥰🥰But she will stay in this moment forever, which is not a pity, because she is really beautiful for now🥰I am already at a loss for words to praise her🥰

Brodonlor

Her soul has left, leaving a perfect body to us, don't waste it😍🥰Most importantly, she already knew her fate and end. She pay her life to prove that the destined fate cannot be changed. We are just following the guiding of fate....😍🤣🤣🤣🤣Oh fk what am I talking about😂🤣🤣🤣I am quibbling for my desire for huge breasts🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂But seriously, Lilly is indeed a character that takes both the appearance design and the story🥰Riese and Haruka have not enough description of before their death,Emma have the story but she figure is not as stunning as Lilly's(If you want to redraw Emma, ​​I think you just make her breasts as big as Yui or Kotoha. She's not as mature as Lilly or Cecilia, so no need to keep drawing big breast characters🤔)But my love for the character Lilly is real, from the story to the body🥰😂😂Thank you for creating such a wonderful character and writing a story worthy of her, even though it is a tragedy🥰🥺

Brodonlor

Yua, Yui and Airi in Assault 3 all have such scenes. Other authors tend to put their hands on the breasts without gripping them, and the breasts are still round, which is a pity🥺Ah, I focused on my breasts🤣😂😂Mainly because I've already said a lot about my feelings about Lilly under the original post for Lilly's work, and I've also given you many suggestions about Lilly's later stories. I really don't know what else to say🥺But it is also true that Lilly's huge breasts make her more attractive😍🥰A girl with a kind and determined personality, a beautiful face and a good figure (especially huge breasts😍🥰), she is definitely the dream partner of many people, both in the story and outside the story😍🥰🥰

Brodonlor

It make me feel sad about her death instead of thinking that her body would be attractive when I saw her death. Your aside is really well written😭🥰But Lilly's huge breast is still unforgettable😍🥰Such a beautiful girl with a great figure is really tempting, even she was a corpse😍🥰I am looking forward the next work for Lilly, but I hope you can practice drawing deformations more. I hope there will be more scenes of grabbing and kneading breasts. Characters with huge breasts like Lilly, Cecilia and Yua really should have more such plots😍🥰You seem to be quite skilled at drawing slightly squashed breasts now. Yui on page 4 of assault 3 is the first time you draw an really breast grab. Even though Yui has very few scenes, I still like the two pictures where Yui appears, especially page 4😍😍🥰I hope there will be more scenes of grabbing breasts with full hands, grabbing the breasts tightly, and the nipples and areolas being squeezed out to appear more prominent😍😍😍

Brodonlor

Before say the figure, I want to say again, I really love Lilly's story, the story makes her death more sadder, even death is only the end of her life, not her body. As I said before, her story shows the powerlessness of fighting against fate but failing😭🥺A beautiful and determined girl died at the hands of the boy she trusted. Her body was used as a tool for the boy and other people who hated her to satisfy their desires, and she eventually became someone's exclusive plaything😭🥺

Brodonlor

About Lilly, just as I said before, the character portrayal of Lilly is excellent. Just as I said before, Lilly's character development is so great. It tells a story in less than the page count of Assault 3. A story that truly saddens me😭🥺A girl who could see the future, she tried to fight fate but failed, her virginity was taken away by the boy she trusted and she die by his hands🥺About the character design(appearance, figure and personality), I think she has an indescribable beauty, like a very pure and gentle feeling, but she can see the future, and it feels like she is using her smile to cover up her anxiety🥺Maybe what I thought of is not your real setting for Lilly, but I can feel that your description of her is very detailed, from her facial expressions to her dialogues🥰

Brodonlor

haahahahahahahhahah😂😂😂😂hello~😉😉😉😉😉

natyz

WHO has awaken me and disturb my slumber the heart ripped guy with the keyword of heart ripped!!! 😂😂😂 and oh hello Brobrobrodonlor

bloody painter

WHO has awaken me and disturb my slumber the heart ripped guy with the keyword of heart ripped!!! 😂😂😂 and oh hello Natyz chan

bloody painter

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawawaw, I'll be a little late ;_; SRYYYY afaadfasdaf but I will get a new upload out within this weekend! I've made Kalse chan's comic even more tasty and added more to it than originally planned! please wait just a little bit longer. also, I'll be sending out all the pixiv requests this weekend. (This isn't related to Fanbox, but I'm posting this just in case request owner came looking for an update!)

natyz

o m g shoulder wound!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's right, I missed that! hahahahahhah you so sharp. thank youuuu. ;_; Ugh, that's right... I was satisfied with the volume and overall quality of assault 3, but it's true that I worked on the line art and coloring from the moment I woke up until I went to bed, and I was still barely able to deliver it at the end of the month. I think I missed some small details because I was in such a hurry. I'll be more careful in the future😂😂😂 and thank you so much for your comments on my other works as well! I've read them carefully now, but I'll also save them as a txt file to refer to when planning armedjk theme work!😊😊🥰🥰🥰

natyz

I still can't send the comment for Lilly, I still don't finish written for it😭🥺But even though I said a lot about ArmedJK, I still seem to prefer you to continue Lilly's story🥺Lilly, Noa and Airi are my favorite for new characters (starting from Cecilia and including her)🥰And I have many about Lilly I want to say, This maybe longer than the one I said about the ArmedJK characters combined, it should be more than one paragraph😐🥺I guess you must want to hear what I say about Lilly, but pls wait a moment, I will do it as soon as possible, I hope you won't be too tired to listen my nagging😭🥺🥰

Brodonlor

Or draw her twitching slightly and peeing after death, that would be very erotic😍😍😍and it's a pity that the pussy you drew at that time was too blurry and not have details. I hope you can redraw this scene🥺And the last page where she is lying naked on the bed with her hair disheveled, with her lifeless eyes, tongue hanging out and small but round breasts, she is so cute🥰😍But her story is too short. She died in an instant just like Haruka but Haruka doesn't have such a long backstory, Kotoha's background story is meaningless. However, I don't think there is any need to reset the story. Just pay attention to it when creating new characters in the future, I want to see Kotoha has used by someone again😍🥰

Brodonlor

Speaking of Kotoha, I almost forgot her😂She deserves a new story or even a remake too. Her collection seems to be second only to Yui's assault2. I don't know how to say her. It seems that your character style makes her very beautiful. Even though her eyes and hair color are the same, she has a very youthful and cute feeling, It's not that other characters don't fit the JK image I say, but when I first see Kotoha, I felt that she was the character closest to a real JK🥰I love the pic she sits against the wall and incontinence after being killed on page 5😍In the next two pages, lift her skirt, take off her panties and watch her pee, I really like watching this kind of the girl's life passing away😍Maybe the soldier was even pressing his hands on her lower abdomen to squeeze out the urine? even not, if you will redraw Kotoha's story, I think you can draw this plot😍

Brodonlor

And about trigger extra, the image on page 9 for the soldier using Akane's body was soooo great, but the brain fragments flying out were too big and not realistic, and the brain did not flow out of the bullet hole on this page. I hope when you draw girls killed by headshots in the future, you will try to make they more like Kotoha's dead look(open or half open eyes ofcourse😍😂)one more thing, The brains flowing out of Yui and Airi are white, and the wound on Yui's shoulder is not drawn. You must be too anxious to publish your work or too focused on some other things(nipples?😂) and overlooked them🥺Pay attention to this in the future but don't make yourself too tired, the more complete of overall picture and characters will look better🥺

Brodonlor

About ArmedJK, I have more to say, I hope the girls who got headshot have their brains splattered out like pieces, the brain and blood has flowed out along near the bullet hole, I looked in the dictionary, but I couldn't find a different word for the solid brain and the liquid substance. They both seem to be called "brain" or "brains"in English?😂I don't even know how to say it in English. I hope you can draw the picture of brain's fragments splattered with blood and brain fluid. Just like Kotoha, I think her dead look is the most realistic and beautiful after being shot in the head. You know what I mean😂

Brodonlor

Yes, I see the OL have a different eye shape, but I go back to look again, The eye shape doesn't change that much, it's mainly the eyelashes I see?🤔But even so, such a small change makes the character look different. I believe you can create more distinctive characters by fine-tuning the eye shape and eyelashes in the future🥰

Brodonlor

Oh, thank you for your feedback! about Lyrica chan! thanks for remembering her, hahahahahah I was trying to change her appearance a bit, just like how I slightly changed the uniform design this time. But if she gets to appear again in the future, I'll definitely keep your opinion in mind! And about haruka chan😊😊😊 yes, I'll positively consider it! I'll also try to work on the eye shapes! I guess... I try to vary the eye shapes based on their personalities, but most of my favorite original characters have similar personalities, hahahahahhahah I think I gave them some variation during the Office lady, but anyway, I'll keep working on this part!🥰🥰🥰hehehehe

natyz

I haven't finished writing about Lilly's part yet, pls still wait for me😭🥺

Brodonlor

And I have a suggestion I haven't said yet, you might need to practice drawing different eye shapes. Your characters all have the same eye shape, they all strike me as unique because they have different hair, eye color, and story plot. But on page 5 of Assault 3, when you lower the saturation, Yui and Lyrica look so much similar because they have same eye shapes😂🥺I believe that if you start practicing drawing different eye shapes, your character designs will have a greater breakthrough, but the old characters can keep as they are, change the eye shape will make their images look different🤔🥺

Brodonlor

And two other members of Haruka's team, Miyu and Kanada, Their death process and stories after death have not yet been unfolded. You can draw their stories, or redraw their images and upload it. But I really hope you will be a rewrite of Haruka's story, just draw her with her original image. The ArmedJK series starts with Haruka, and she is one of my favorite early characters besides Emma and Riese. I may go back to the post to talk about this in detail later, but not now, it's too long😂🥺

Brodonlor

I maybe send a part of ArmedJK, I will send Lilly's part on a day or two🥺 About ArmedJK and Lilly, It's hard for me to give direct advice. ArmedJK can be said to be your most successful series, include trigger and assault, starting from Haruka, the characters are all likable🥰I remember there was another member named Lyrica in Yui's team, maybe you can complete her story? Yui and Airi are buried, but she is not there🤔And I find a problem for Lyrica, her hairstyle in Assault 2 and 3 is different. Her hairstyle in Assault 3 is the same as Yua's. When I first saw her on page 5 of Assault 3, I thought she is Yua😂😂😂If Lyrica will show on again, I hope you can change her hairstyle back to the same she had in 2🥺

Brodonlor

hehehehe nevermind!!! yeah, i will! 😊🥰😊🥰😊🥰

natyz

I understand, and I probably can't send complete comment today, I haven't finished writing yet, I still live with my parents and my dad just come back, I don't have my own room at home😕I must avoid them when I am writing comment to you, I don't want they ask too much what I talking to other person, especially my dad😕pls wait for me(again)😭

Brodonlor

Oh, "more depth" doesn't mean anything too big things! I just meant that I want to continue creating the kind of settings that so many of you, my dear cold eyes, enjoyed in a successful series like the assaut! hehehehe I'm so glad you like it. And did you have a fun day today?! Please get some good rest 😊😊🥰🥰🥰🥰 Thank you! Ahhh, I'm having such a busy time. I have to upload the pixiv request comics soon... but honestly, there are some parts I'm not satisfied with, so I'm reworking them a bit. I wonder if I can finish by the end of the month... Ahhh,fast fast fast...

natyz

I am played game most time today😂I want to know what are you say for "more depth"?what aspect of the character is it about?🤔The character's personality or something?but even not this what I say, The character's personality descriptions before death really makes them more charming🥰Even they are just corpses after death, they are still unique. I liove Airi, Lilly, Noa and several other characters because of this🥰hope your character creation can go further🥰I'm already writing the comment, but I have too much to say. I haven't finished writing about ArmedJK yet, and I haven't written about Lilly at all😭I might fully post tomorrow, I haven't gotten up on a holiday's morning in a long time. I should go to bed and give myself more time off tomorrow😭wait for me😭🥰

Brodonlor

hehehehehehe thank youuu!!!🥰🥰🥰okay!!! and thanks for kind words to cold eyes too😊😊😊😊

natyz

It's going to take a bit more time, but I want to add more depth and to the characters and maintain a good balance between the scenes before and after death, much like in the assault 3. ah, and I'm also thinking of trying some new things with how I depict wounds and use text. I even bought a few new brushes to help! and I want to make the dialogue more intense and fill the pages with more lines... and I also have an idea to try handdrawing the sound effects...hmm Anyway, I truly hope that you cold eyes will like these new attempts, and I'm always grateful to my coldeyes for understanding, even if the uploads are a bit slow. hehehe you guys always say to me "don't lush" 😊😊💛💛🥰 loveeee

natyz

🥰🥰🥰🥰 Yeah, I think THE ASSAULT 3 was a tasty and hit! I want more this again death and the afterdeath in the my original manga series~ however, it was definitely hard as the pages got longer hahahahahh but I'll do my best to keep working hard! Thank youuuuu😊😊😉💛hehe!

natyz

ty for reply! still editing my request.tbh it's hard to choose the theme and the character i want.if ready i'll send pm and comfirm the details.GL and have a nice day!also greetings to coldeyes!

ALIENLEMON

Oh, I write wrong thing, I mean every character will have the girls death and "after their death" plot like Airi😂

Brodonlor

One more thing, I hope the new version for faded truth can be long as Assault 3. I hope that every character will have a death and afterlife description like Airi🥰ut pls pay attention to your energy and body. If you paint two such long works will make you too tried, then you can take more time to complete it, don't rush, or just forget it, anyway, don't tire yourself🥺8 hours classes is waiting me on tomorrow, I need rest now, good night🥺🥰

Brodonlor

hehehehehehehehe yeah i will wait 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

natyz

Oh, he said that?I even don't know it, I never saw he say it😂maybe I missed it before😂You should keep it secret, he might see your comment😂And I'm honored to have provided you with a great inspiration😂🥰I hope there will be a plot where Emma be using by mercenaries after her death, like in the original work🥰😍I hope you can redraw Emma's pose same like page 8, she's dead, but one man hold her head and made her face her heart, like she's looking at it, pls don't give up this perfect composition. She is so beautiful at this moment, and the heart you drew is also so beautiful🥰And pls consider my suggestions for Emma's final end! I look forward to her full story🥰I will send you another comment about my opinion for "Lilly or ArmedJK"on Saturday, I have eight hours of classes on Friday, it is so tired😭😭😭🥺wait for me🥰

Brodonlor

Brodonlor, thank you for the great idea!!!! Yes, I'm all for your idea of redrawing "emma"'s death scene! October is also the birthday of 'heart rip guy', one of my love cold eyes. I was thinking of making a 'heart rip' comic for him, and I think it would be a great time to remake "faded truth" as well! I really love the feeling you described... of "emma" having her heart ripped out while she's still alive, watching her own heart as she dies! Thank you. I've got an amazing idea!!! hehehehehe🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

natyz

but if the necromancy spell is no longer effective, Emma will just turn back into a corpse, what else can happen before she's buried......you know what I mean🥰Emma is a tragic character, but I am still fascinated by her beauty face and body😍🥰That's all suggestions I can get you🥰And for your post, I want to say my opinion for "Lilly or ArmedJK", but I'm about to go to class🥺😂😂I will send you another comment in the evening or next two days🥰Hope can see Emma again🥰

Brodonlor

If for the story, I don't know what specific story you've thought about Emma and Loren. I can't come up a idea for the middle story. I can only imagine the final end of Emma and Loren. For example, whether Loren succeeds in revenge or not, she can succeed or fail and become one of the corpses to be used. If she succeeds or die together with the enemy(I think it's the noble who kill Riese and Yuna?), what will happen to Emma, ​​who has become Loren puppet? I think the real Emma is long dead, and what Loren resurrected is just a zombie. But perhaps it can be said that she has some remnants of Emma's consciousness, but no longer has normal human cognition? Or is this Emma herself, her soul want to rest but unable to say it by herself because she is controlled by Loren's magic? I wanted the story to end with Emma actually died, let her soul rest in peace after a series of stories🥺

Brodonlor

I don't know how to continue the story, I have no ideas like you, so what I said above is that if you haven't figured out how to continue Emma's story and just redraw the original work, then the above are my suggestions for improving the details of Emma's story reset😐

Brodonlor

one more thing, if Emma died of massive blood loss after having her heart removed, her face could be painted slightly whiter to make it more realistic, and there is no redness on her face except for the blood at the corner of her mouth, while preserving the bloodstains at the corners of her chest, and her lifeless eyes. This is my ideal image of Emma after her death, you can refer to it🥰In the original work, Emma died from being stabbed in the heart while being raping. I've said before that I really liked her expression at that moment. Perhaps you could combine the old and new versions to fully show the process of Emma being stripped and raping, killed, her heart dug out, and her body used🥰

Brodonlor

I have a new idea, Emma's story can rewrite like this, Emma is no longer dying from bleeding due to being stabbed in the abdomen, but having her heart removed alive. She is dying and crying while looking at her heart and gradually dies. As for whether she was raping before her heart was removed or after her death, I think it's fine. I hope to replicate the scene where Emma's head is held facing her heart🥰In the original story, she died quite peacefully. I'm looking forward to redrawing her death and rewriting a more painful ending for her (the period of time she was actually alive before being resurrected after her death). It can make Emma like Airi in Assault 3, you can draw more diverse expressions for her. The greatly improved expression are also one of the reasons why I like Airi. I hope Emma can also be portrayed in this way🥰Also, please make sure Emma opens her eyes like Airi🥺🥰

Brodonlor

I see, I still hope the story continues after Emma is resurrected, or you could consider redrawing the existing story and redesigning Loren's image and story, but Emma still can't escape the fate of death. I think it would be better if your story has some character death plot, but I always hope to continue with the existing story🥺If you have no idea, you can consider redrawing faded truth and describe the process from Emma being killed to being raping and having her heart dug out in more detail🥰I really love page 8 (the order in the original picture), the way Emma's heart is dug out and her head is held facing her heart, like she is looking at her own heart🥰she's so beautiful at this moment🥰

Brodonlor

alienlemon! Thank you for your kind words. It sounds like you've been busy lately! I hope all the problems you're facing get resolved smoothly! 😊😊 If you ever need some love energy, always feel free to stop by here~ And regarding pixiv requests! I don't have a fixed price per illustration, but when my "cold eyes" send a request in the 8,000 to 12,000 yen range, I typically draw 2 ~ 4 illustrations! It's like I freely draw a portrait shot and some extra cuts~ and For those who want to request 'more cuts' in detail, they usually consult with me via DM first to discuss the specifics of the request, and then we set the price! hehehe

natyz

btw,how many pages could be accepted each request?or it depends on the character or the amount of storyboards?wanna findout the payment cost of my custom requirements! ty!

ALIENLEMON

so happy to see so many coldeyes sending request.still working out on how to get request payment done...sad. being busy these days but will support as always,hope someday i'll get the issues done in real life and finish the hardwork recently.As always,plz take care!

ALIENLEMON

awww~ thank you very much Natyz chan!!!>w< 🥰🥰🥰😊😊😊😊

bloody painter

so manymanymany~ >w< 😊😊😊😊

natyz

oh,hehehehehe I see so how cute am I?

bloody painter

It's so fun when my cold eyes copy my "hehehehehe" 😂😂🤣🤣🤣🥰

natyz

can you please explain about how did we imitating your way of speaking please Natzy chan 🤣🤣🤣and awww I'm cute? thank youuu🥰🥰🥰 but how cute am I?

bloody painter

Ah, or maybe... I could continue Emma's story without a reboot...? It might not be a story about revenge for Loren and Emma, but couldn't an Emma who was brought back to life by necro-magic appear in another sequel? Hmm... I'm sorry, my thoughts are so disorganized, I'm just rambling. Hahahaha, I have so much to think about! So many choices!!

natyz

hhahahahah so cute how you guys all are imitating my way of speaking 🤣🤣🤣🥰🥰🥰

natyz

uaaaahahahh, so many ideas are suddenly popping into my head... But my old stories feel too dated to just continue them as they are, so I feel like I need to restart them somehow, maybe with a reboot... uaaaa, I have so much to think about... hmmmmm!!!!!!!!👁👁👁👁👁👁👁

natyz

I'm so happy to hear that you like Emma! Yes, she was originally called the "Guild Girl" and is my first original FB character! With the exception of the story featuring Loren, I've written all of her stories myself. The episodes with Loren were written by someone else. While I have the creative rights, I wasn't entirely satisfied with how I drew Loren, so I'm not sure if I can continue the story from that point. I truly love Emma as well! Should I reboot her story...? Or maybe have her appear in a new series in a role where she investigates the deaths of characters...? I'll give it some serious thought...!

natyz

Emma was resurrected by Loren using necromancy, and then used to track down the mercenaries who killed Yuna. This work clearly has a richer storyline, and it would be a shame to leave it aside. I look forward to her future stories, and I also hope you'll write better stories not just necrophilia!🥺🥰Pls don't let Emma disappear😭🥺

Brodonlor

Here is comment I don't send but I finished writing last night(Changed a little), I've said before. When I read Emma's story, I feel she is pitiful🥺The story has gotten to the point where she's been resurrected no long(is she really resurrected? She looks like a zombie or something, she doesn't react to being naked, even Loren need to tell her who she is again. I might leave a comment on older works later, including other works, we can discuss it there later). I think Faded Truth has the most potential to be a full-fledged story! Even Assault 3 still focused heavily on killing and using on girls' bodies. I really love it and I have many to say but not now. Starting with Faded Truth 2, I've seen more story progression.

Brodonlor

BGS is too persistent in some directions that should not be do, resulting in the game content being too fragmented, many content not like in the same game, and there are many designs in the universe that are inconsistent with reality, even if they are things that have been confirmed by real astronomy. In addition, the human society in Starfield has lost the desire to explore the universe, and it is a repressed society like Cyberpank 2077 but no cool battles😐and the main story just 💩💩💩I don't want to say more about it, it is too infuriating to me😡fk the screenwriter, he's insulting the scientists who look up at the stars😡😡😡We need reason and answers, not fantasy and religion😡It's up to you to decide whether to play it or not. For me, I can play it, but I'm not addicted or very happy to it, I play Starfield mainly because it was the first work of bgs in 2016 after 5 years.😐

Brodonlor

For the game, I don't know how to say, the bgs, thay look like doesn't seem to know what games to make, Starfield is a playable game, it is a decent work, but there are a lot of things that could be better, I expect more from it than this. Sorry, I don't know how to describe the game vocabulary accurately in English. Because TESV was my favorite game, and my interest for the universe since I was a child has been rekindled recently, so I played Starfield some time in this Sep, I am a natural born RPG player, but the RPG design of Starfield is not better than TESV, even regressive, can you image that? It is bgs who made TES series, 2 time Best of the year game(TESIV&TESV, they both won the VGA game of the year award), I have never played Fallout so I won't comment it.

Brodonlor

About Emma, I never think that!😯I always thought it was your original story🥺I remember that you said Emma is the guild girl on your first published work on pixiv, I follow you because of this work, so I have some feelings for her, ​​and I am really want to see the next story😭🥺Did you named her and design new look by yourself?I really really hope Emma's story doesn't end here😭Could you ask the original author's permission and let you write Emma's story to continue?😭🥺And I don't know how can rewrite Yuna's story, I think you can try it in future, but pls consider continuing Emma's story😭I also want to see how beautiful she can be with your current level of painting and her future after she died🥺The original version is already great, just the breasts are a bit weird🥺

Brodonlor

I'm good too and it ok hehehe

bloody painter

I am very good, and you? Thanks for asking heart ripped man hehehe

pixie

By the way pixie how are you?

bloody painter

YEAH!!! What pixie said is correct!!! So you have to relax and take a good care of yourself so you can stay with us for a very long time until the very end of earth 😆 🤣 😂 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 😊😘😘😘😘🥰👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀👁👁🫁🫀🫀🫀

bloody painter

😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘uaaaaah!! thank youuuuuuu ;_; hehehehehe........!!!!!!

natyz

take good care of yourself natyz, don't stress too much you gotta relax sometimes we can wait there's no rush :>

pixie

and about Faded Truth, I think I might work more on Yuna's story someday. To be honest, the story and script for Emma's story scripts were provided by someone else, and since it wasn't a story I created myself, it's difficult for me to continue with a sequel. So, I might just reboot Yuna's story from the beginning instead...! hehe...

natyz

Brodonlor! Thank you so much for your kind words! 🥰🥰🥰🥰😆🙌 Is Starfield fun? I want to play an open-world game too... I recently reinstalled RDR2, only to uninstall it again 😂 There are no fun games lately... Ah, back to my work! Yes, the requested pieces can be a bit short. However, the plots for two moderately long and 'tasty' original works are waiting, so please look forward to the next original comics~! This time, it looks like it will be a new series instead of a sequel to an existing work...?! And I will do my best to make sure the longer works have the same level of quality as the shorter ones...! hehehe...good night!🥰

natyz

And I remember faded truth too!I am look forward next episode, I am looking forward to Emma's next story and want to know more about the setting of this work. I even look forward to being able to connect with the stories of other characters, not just the story using the girl's corpse🥰 I have little things want to say(In terms of the length of the chat between you and me🤣😂)I will send it tomorrow, I've been staying up late lately. I should get more rest. Good night🥰

Brodonlor

These works are a bit short this time😂I thought it would be like trigger extra😂But I can see that your works are becoming more and more refined🥰especially the characters' faces and expressions🥰I hope your future works will be of this level, even long works like Assault 3 can be like this too🥰 And I may take some time, or even next year, I can leave comments on your first few works🥺I've been addicted to Starfield this month and the spiritual sequel to my childhood game came out two days ago, even though it's an early access version, I just can't leave this game😭🥺Classes and part-time jobs have taken up a lot of my time, so I'd rather play games during the holidays🥺 I'll leave a comment for the first few works when I have more time, so pls wait for me~😭🥺I wish I had a talent for non-native language,when I have that, I can type in English just like I type in Chinese. I will feel much more relaxed by this way🥲🥺anyway, pls wait for my lengthy praise in future😂🥺

Brodonlor

hehehehehehee 😊😘😘😘😘🥰 thank youuu for your kind heart👁👁🫁🫀🫀

natyz

if a few day past and it still didn't feel better I think you should go to see doctor please I'm worry about you

bloody painter

I think my jaw hurts simply because of fatigue! I'm not sure if I slept on it wrong, but it's been aching for a few days now ;_; need painkillers!! but I'm sure it'll get better soon!

natyz

really? but it better safe than sorry tho and what about the jaw and gum? did you go to see doctor yet?

bloody painter

OH about the endoscopy? yeah, I haven't had it yet ;_; I've been feeling a lot better then, and I don't have insurance, so the cost of the test here is honestly a bit of a burden in my country... so I kept putting it off... hahahahah...... but will be fine, though! 😂👍😘

natyz

I hope you get well soon too but did you go to the doctor yet?

bloody painter

honestly, I haven't been feeling very well TwT my jaw and gums have been hurting so much for the past few days, tired and can't sleep properly... really hope I get better soon😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

natyz

OH!!! so that the reason and I will continue to request heart rip in the future lol also how are you Natyz chan

bloody painter

!! I don't get notifications unless it's a direct reply, so I almost missed this message! hahahahahahh The reason is simple, you're the one who always so passionately requests heart rip, so you've really stuck in my memory!

natyz

え! あのシリーズを覚えていてくださるなんて、ものすごく嬉しいです···! はい、積極的に検討してみます!!!!

natyz

hehehhehehe🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

natyz

lol thank man!! but I also like this nickname too!! lol also how are you pixie? and Natyz chan can you please tell me the reason why you give me a nickname, the heart ripped man or heart ripped guy please?

bloody painter

what your name? 沃伦

bloody painter

いつかFaded Truthも続けてほしいな。続きがめちゃ気になる

imagelesskink

hahaha i like how you got a nickname, the heart ripped man haha

pixie

There are so many things! Super surprised🥰😧

113225

😂😂😂😂😂😘😘😘hahhahahahahahahah yeah i m waiting "heart rip day" 😎😎😎😎

natyz

hahahhahahah my lovely guys 😘😘😘😘

natyz

nice to meet you,too!😘

沃伦

Hi we meet again!!! I'm heart ripped man that what Natyz chan called me nice to meet you

bloody painter

UWOOOOO!!!! HEART MENTION!!! I WANT TO SEE MORE HEART RIPPED!!! lol 😂😂😂😂😂😂 Love from you lovely Heart Ripped man

bloody painter

哦哦哦!新的晚餐!😋😋😋

沃伦

hehe!!!!!!!!😊😊😋😋😋

natyz

非常期待=w=

5566101

hehehehehe😊😊😊😊

natyz

可爱😊

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