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Nobless Fallen 2 [11P]





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this work is natyz legacy work Part 2!

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リリーは商団を率いる若き実業家であり、

彼女の黄金の瞳は近い未来を予知する能力を持つと言われている。

多くの者が彼女を畏れ、あるいは敬っているが、

彼女自身はその力を祝福ではなく呪いだと考えていた。

彼女が見た未来はほぼ確実に実現し、

その過程で彼女は無力感と孤独を抱え続けてきた。


だからこそ、リリーはある少年を助手として傍に置いた。

彼女は、自分がその少年に犯され、殺される未来を見た。

それでもなお、その運命が変えられるか確かめたかったのだ。


少年が別の選択をしてくれることを願いながら、

彼女は優しい微笑みを決して失わない。

しかし、その笑顔の奥には、運命に抗いたいという切実な想いが秘められていた。

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Lilly是一位年轻的商团领袖,据说她的金色瞳眸拥有预知近未来的能力。

许多人对她敬畏有加,亦或是心生恐惧,然而她自己却将这份能力视为诅咒,而非祝福。

她所见之未来几乎都会成真,而在这过程中,她饱受无力感与孤独的折磨。


正因如此,Lilly选择让某个少年作为助手留在身边。

她曾预见自己会被那名少年侵犯并杀害。

即便如此,她仍渴望确认,这份命运是否真的无法改变。


怀揣着少年能做出不同选择的期待,她始终不曾失去那温柔的微笑。

然而,在那笑容背后,却隐藏着她那渴望逆转命运的强烈愿望。

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Lilly is a young entrepreneur leading the trade guild, and it is said that her golden eyes possess the ability to foresee the near future.

Many either revere or fear her, yet she considers her power not a blessing, but a curse.

The futures she sees almost always come true, leaving her to endure a constant sense of helplessness and solitude.


For this reason, Lilly chose to keep a certain boy by her side as an assistant.

She had foreseen a future where he would violate and kill her.

And yet, she still wanted to believe that fate could be changed.


Hoping that he would make a different choice, she never let go of her gentle smile.

But behind that smile lay a desperate longing—to defy fate itself.



SAD STORY 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Lilly is my OC~ i hope you guys enjoy~




Nobless Fallen 2 [11P] Nobless Fallen 2 [11P]

Comments

Thank you so much!!! This comic is a work I’m deeply attached to as well. I’m so happy to hear that it touched your heart 😊💖💖💖💖 Lilly is absolutely adorable!

natyz

this one is top rank of my personal list of your series😋 kind heartworming girl facing her forseen death is so sad but tasty

ALIENLEMON

Hi natyz I'm back!!! I'm still waiting for the heart ripped work or manga anyway good job as well cheer!!🥰😍😘

bloody painter

true!! 😄😄😄

natyz

have no choice, feeling helpless and dying in peace, this is the best XP

Momora Mora

😭😭😭😭

natyz

せめて死体だけは最後まで少年が持って行けば良かった…

Angelegend

and I'm really glad you're happy with the Chinese translation! I pay extra attention to each translation so you can fully enjoy the charm of the characters in every language. Hehehe, I'm truly delighted! And about the butt~ I'd love to draw more of them in the future! I've been drawing a lot of front views lately, hehehehe. I also think Riese's After story will be really fun! After her body was moved from "faded truth" to the guild, Yuna cleans it up thoroughly, but what happens next... it really sparks my imagination~ heheheehehehehehehehe😘💙💙

natyz

Thank you always for your kind attention! 😘💙💙 I'm truly delighted that you notice the effort I put in, and I'm so happy and relieved that it brings you satisfaction! Hehehe, and all the characters are my OCs, but Lilly is a character I've been using in my personal creations and TRPG for a long time~ Of course, I completely reworked her background and origins for the FB story, but her kind heart remains the same no matter what world she's in~ But oh! I just realized I got the numbering wrong in this piece hahahahahh. I'll fix it before uploading the next work! I think it happened because I write together the entire FB story including future parts at once and then shuffled the order around~hahahah

natyz

That's all🥰😭I always have many words to say😂😭It's great to see your painting skills and the quality of your works getting better🥰one more question,you say Lilly is your OC,but aren't most characters in your works actually OC? Or am I misunderstanding OCs? Is Lilly closer to your ideal girl type? 🤔😏anyway,love your work,still waiting new work and good story🥰😭

Brodonlor

About Riese,she's cute always,love her cute face and delicate body🥰But it's a pity that she only has one picture🥺Including Riese, there are many characters I want to see their again🥺for example,Haruka,Yui,Yuna,Emma,Cecilia,Yuzuki and Yaori🥺 I hope there will be a follow-up story for Riese,one suggestion for Riese's after story:this boy who killed Lilly,he seems fond of her,he was caught because he sneaking into the thatched cottage and using Riese's body,I think the next story could be that, he killed Lilly and completed the mission, then his uncle give him Riese's body as a reward, leaving the two of them alone. I think it would be great if the story continued this way.I really really want to see another complete story for Riese🥰🥺

Brodonlor

Love the last page too,Lilly was bought and hung on a rope, becoming someone's collection, a scene that had never been seen in old works😍But I prefer the girl to die by suffocation😂I agree with my Chinese compatriot's suggestion. I hope there will be a long story about killing a girl by suffocation in the future too😍

Brodonlor

I also like the way Lilly's body is used and handled as objects after page 8. This work has a special feature. In other stories, the girls don't know that they will be raped by more people after their death,and their bodies will be sold. I don't know if Carl knew her last words(maybe she knew this, they know each other for a long time; she should have known that his ability,maybe she want to express her unspoken feels before he died?) And she would still have the charm to attract Cale after her death, she wouldn't think of this, and her body will be stolen by others to continue to use and sell to another people. While Lilly can foresee the future, she already knows her fate but never resists and walks to the given ending, which has little impact on the direction of the story. However, I feel sad but excited too, about every detail of Lilly knowing how she will be treated after her death 😍

Brodonlor

And love the scene on page 9 where Lilly is be using by two people, showing her huge breast and ass. You seem to rarely draw girl's ass, Is it because of lack of draw skill?(Sorry if this is too direct, pls forgive me, I always like your work but I also hope it will be better😭🥺)I hope there will be more in future😍Want to see girls lying on their stomachs, with men inserting from behind, show their plump ass, and drawing pictures of men ramming their ass with men's lower bodies😍And pls consider having girls open their eyes when they are used for oral sex in the future, just like when Cecilia just died and was used by the goblins,or consider what I said before, providing expression difference pictures🥰And hope will have a picture for man will use both hands to hold the girl's head, or the hair on the top of the head, or hold the girl's chin with both hands, using them to do a oral sex😍

Brodonlor

Ok,Clean up the mood,I want to talk more about the work itself, every picture is completely repainted, and the quality feels even higher than trigger 01. I love every page of Lilly before and after her death. She is so beautiful🥰And she has huge breasts😍even Cecilia and Yuzuki can't compare to her, with huge breasts that match her pretty face🥰😍And I love the picurte her breasts shaking as the boy is raping her on page 5, so erotic 😍This story is so sad so I didn't notice it at first, but it's really a great improvement!🥰hope will be have in furute🥰😍Maybe Cecilia,Yuzuki or any huge breast girls in future?😍

Brodonlor

She may even foresee that after her death, more people will use her corpse and sell her like a commodity, but she doesn't resist and waits for the boy to change his mind. What a kind girl🥺😭The way she looked and what she said before she died seemed so desperate😭She is as kind as Cecilia😭When I finished reading the whole story, When I read the whole story, I felt the same sadness as Lilly. Your lines were so good😭And the Chinese translation is excellent!!!👍😭If someone read the Chinese version only,I think they will think you are Chinese or have Chinese ancestry😂👍Your translation level is so high😭Even though I can understand the English version (partly with help of translation tools), I still feel Lilly's sadness and despair in the Chinese version😭😭😭💔What poor girl and sad story😭💔This is the first time I feel sad when I see a girl die but not excited about her corpse first😭💔

Brodonlor

Finlly,new work has come! love it🥰but the number of this work is wrong,it should be no.33,trigger 01 is no.32😂 Your story and character development have a great improve! I Love Lilly but not just her body,she can predict the future but can't change it. The smile hides the worry about the foreseeable and unchangeable future.She even foresaw her own death,but she still mustered up the courage to face the future, even if she will die. Even though she was raped and seriously injured by the boy, she still persuaded him not to kill again in the future,make her is the first and last people be kill🥺

Brodonlor

谢谢!hehehehehe,这感觉和标本制作有点关联吗?看起来非常诱人😋😋😋。嗯,确实,既然Lilly成了某个邪恶贵族的私有物,我也很想试试画出那样的结局呢!

natyz

加油,作者你的画风很可爱,非常喜欢你的作品,它很有特点和辨识度❤

viet. kgm

Sad story!😭😭😭😭😭之前提议的要素大多认真都采纳了👍,非常感谢!要是最后一页是将Lilly作为一个摆件摆好姿势放置在某处,那就更棒了!这个文本挺合适的😭。您知道挂壁装饰吗?还有门关或摆在走廊边的骑士铠甲、等身雕塑。😋

安卓猫黑先生

hahahahahahahah True!!

natyz

是的,当然啦!因为我的工作速度有点慢,可能会稍微耽搁一些,但我打算尝试各种不同的东西! hehehehe

natyz

😭😭💙hehehehehee

natyz

The largest chest in history 😧

113225

感谢作者,我很喜欢你的可爱风格,可以在以后的作品中尝试描绘更多的死法吗!比如窒息、穿刺等?

viet. kgm

😭😭😭😭😭

沃伦


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