WDYT: Perky, Pink & Perfect - Seduction

Thanks, I must've been in too much of a rush to read it that I glossed over that page!

TotesNotThea

You can find a list on the second page :)

TGTrinity

Yes liked a little more than average. In the end enjoyed despite not loving the beginning. All and all good

Josh

Well done. Damn.

RyPaCo

I think the only criticism would be that a lot of the PPP stories, while there are different plots and characters, follow a similar blueprint of progression.

Skippy Hugo

Amazing work!

Jerome B

It was good, a little better than average. Your art is always top notch ... ... and this time, I feel it was even a little better than usual because the main character didn't look like a standard fashion model ... but instead she was quite attractively cute, in that her facial features were rounder in a welcoming "girl next door" kind of way. She looked like somebody's adorable kid sister who grew up, and I loved that. 💖 Another artistic aspect I quite liked was how the story opened with the bride-to-be's sister looking realistic for a normal woman, with realistic breasts, torso and facial features. In too many of your stories, I feel, most women unrealistically look like Playboy centerfolds even before being transformed ... and it's nice to know not every woman in your universe looks like a sexy model. And although one detail of the story may seem minor, to me it filled in what I thought was a major plot hole in previous stories, and I appreciate it ... the fact that the pills only last six hours. In the past, it seemed like the pill effects were permanent, and it made no sense that there would be multiple pills in a bottle. This aspect of the story adds a welcome complexity to other stories ... for example, it's mentioned that Zelda and the other former guys of her sorority are still all women ... meaning that they all consciously chose to keep taking pills to remain as women, because the pills that made them women would have worn off after six hours. Now one has to wonder about the compromising situations they've been in where they either forgot to take a pill or didn't have access to one ... such as falling asleep after having an awesome night of sex with a hunky frat dude ... and embarrassingly waking up next to him as a guy. We already know that taking multiple pills makes the changes more extreme, but it's unclear whether it also makes the changes last longer. I'd be curious if you explore that ... what would happen if somebody took a whole bunch of pills by mistake, for example. Would they become a mindless sex doll with super-exaggerated features for months, maybe? Other than that, the simple story was mostly routine, as if it was written primarily as a vehicle for the sex scenes and transformation sequences, but there were several nice features. Immoral woman takes transformation pill to seduce her sister's fiancee and becomes super sexy and super horny, she seduces the fiancee and sex ensues, bride-to-be arrives unexpectedly, leading to the groom-to-be taking a pill and becoming a super sexy and super horny woman ... and lots more sex ensues, with a nicely complex happy ending. All in all, I give the story a "B". Not quite "A-list" material, but definitely better than average in a variety of ways.

Eris Brianna Caver Boyd

I changed the style of the image out of curiosity- and holy shit I don't know why Drake would ever go back to being a guy... https://imgur.com/a/bZxj0t0

Wort2001

I always like the PPP comics, and this one had some very good twists to it.

Bob Fink

My only real comment would be that I prefer permanent changes, or at least permanent consequences.

Willow Simmons

Firstly, in Part 10, page 24, Josh is spelt, “Johs.” I wasn’t looking for typos, but that one jumped out. I liked it a lot. I like the PPP concept of a quick change and an assured quick change back, unlike other premises. It opens up characters to naturally being more risk-averse and exploring their boundaries. You could tie this in with TACOS to tempt someone who is already jumping over the line. I also like the twist you did on this one, with Molly playing along to get what she wanted, then using the pills to get payback on Drake. I know a lot of pairs of sisters (I have three), but I do not know of any sisters who would forgive (a) each other, and (b) an errant partner, for that level of transgression. Maybe one, usually neither, but never both. I guess Molly must have really liked Drake as Andrea and sees this as an opportunity that’s a bigger positive than the negative of the betrayal. Two of my sisters didn't speak for thirty years because one of their kids left dirty marks on the wall at the other's house, (Well, at least that's the story we got). Molly was like, ‘It’s OK, Lee-Lee, my bad. I forgive you and my fiancé for going behind my back on the eve of my wedding and having an affair. No harm, no foul.” Are people on your planet really that nice? Molly's further mollification (no pun intended) by the pills from Leigh seems to support that she liked having Andrea as a sexy pet, so I'm wondering if PPP Seduction Part 2 will involve some more of Molly's revenge on Drake. Maybe, Drake will like being Molly’s little hot-wife too much and start going off on his own PPP adventures, like Hillary in ‘Xelda’s Candle’, or maybe Molly will decide she likes Andrea more than she likes Drake or she prefers having a personal porn star to a husband. I can see Molly being a dominant bitch if she had reason, and I can see Drake either caving in or being selfish and doing his own thing behind Molly’s back. He was a bit of a selfish dick, really - not a likeable character, in my eyes. Maybe, he needs Darci as a therapist. I do love the way he kept zoning out as Andrea, when she was thinking about sex, especially looking at Josh’s cock. The way she ‘blissed out’ giving Josh head, suggests that Andrea is a little cock-slut. The pink eye shadow looked fantastic in that scene. Maybe, she’ll prefer life as Andrea. Molly can pimp her out and hook up with Josh. He seemed like a nicer guy. I'm assuming Molly rang Josh (I don't know where she was keeping her phone in that dress - hotel room phone?) to get him to come to Leigh's room off-screen. There were a couple of opportunities when she was on the balcony and another time. I don't know how hard it would be to render, but it would have been cool to have an image or reflection of Molly on the phone in the background during one of Leigh and Andrea's private palavers, so that didn’t just materialise out of the blue without an explanation. You could do the same in the background when Molly left. "Show, don't tell," apparently. PPP Leigh looked stunning, but normal Leigh was still pretty. The colour choice of lingerie was great for her hair colour and complexion and the same was true for Andrea in the black. Great palate and the wet-look texture of the tiles made me think sometimes there were puddles under the girls. Maybe, it’s my imagination. The apartment looked good. Great ‘power’ squat position by Andrea in the last frame, when she went down on Josh, but I don’t know if most girls would do that (not that I would know). They’d probably keep their knees closer together as in the previous scenes and. if necessary, let their heels come up off the ground or their torso angle would be leaning forward too much - making it tiring for the lower back and neck. Biomechanically however, it’s very appropriate if you’ve got the range. Something very funky is going on with the right knee and calf, but that’s probably just what the model does in that extreme range. Andrea looks like she needs to do more hamstring work in that shot. It seems like there’s a bit of a quad-hamstring imbalance there - the top of the thigh is arching quite high, but the bottom looks empty. I doubt if you can adjust those things. It's probably not the first priority when giving a blow-job, though (again, not that I'd know).

Kaffeyette Lektor

I like the stoplight color choice! There a possibility to expect a more *cough* “kinky/bdsm” storyline at some point? 😈😊😏

I really liked it. Is there a specific order to read the other PPP stories in?

TotesNotThea

Loved it. PPP are my favorite stories. Please keep up the good work

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