WDYT: The Lively Lingerie

The entire living clothes kink was hot plus the story was just so good

Codey

I liked that it seemed more like a compulsion / delusion / deception / possession on the part of the lingerie, so it seemed a bit darker than the usual sweetness. Breaking "The three laws of gender-bending" sometimes makes it interesting and less formulaic. Have you ever read Stephen R Donaldson books. They're brilliant, but every character is broken and it's disturbing. (and maybe, so good because of that). You want to love some characters, but you can't, because they're frustratingly flawed. Heroes are also even more heroic if they never seem to win, but keep fighting anyway. I've always been curious to discover who Levi Schimbare is and what his angle is, so my interest is piqued. I agree with others that it would have been good to see the second sister's (starting to sound like Star Wars - Hmmm - corruption analogy) transformation. She looked great, so the transformation would have been nice. That's what people come here for, I guess. Ialso prefer a slower coming to terms with the situation, but that's me, not everyone. Artwork as usual was the high standard we've come to expect. Lynn's face was a curiosity but not a bad one, imo. I'm assuming you kept the same face structure as her male self. Not every character has to be beautiful from a characterisation point of view, but I guess some people want every image to be a wet dream for their own wish fulfilment. I'd like to see more like this.

Kaffeyette Lektor

The facial expressions felt on point.

Bruce W. Liu

I liked the ending, and the transformation of Larry was pretty great.

Theweathermanpro33

I remember when you wrote stories and Timber Grove was so essential. This brought me back to that time. I go back from time to time to read your earlier work. So great seeing it come to life.

I think it was very well done and I loved how it played right into Timber Grove.

Bob Fink

More transformation, don't like off screen changes.

David

There was a bit of jarring between the previous 'timber grove - lively lingerie and the ending of this lively lingerie. Also I was slightly confused that the lingerie totally transformed him and he stayed transformed even when wearing nothing as his wife reverted once the lingerie was removed.

Ampws

Lynn had a bit of a hatchet face. Almost vulpine. This was obviously a setup for a transformation store. Kind of the evil version of Trinity's Trinkets. Looking forward to more, but these personality change stories are a bit unsettling. It's personality death, the memories still exist, but the person and the relationships they had don't.

Ray

I wish we'd seen more of the 2nd person getting transformed. Also I found the main characters face a little off putting. Interesting story overall though! Definitely looking forward to more in this semi-series. I like the idea of some mildly connected stories!

Jacob Keller