WDYT: SNU

I have only one comment, "what goes around comes around".

Fandeboris

Plot was interesting an in the end was slightly surprising. However, didn't have that aspect that made my "blood boil"

Josh

On a separate note, despite Laney's body looking amazing in this image, I liked her better in the story images with different lighting and less extreme make-up. I get Joker vibes from her face here, especially the lips.

Kaffeyette Lektor

I have made my usual comments before, so I won't labour them, because I know there are readers who don't like what I like and vice versa. You have to make a balance with your membership. I agree with a lot of the other comments, above. (1) The quality of images is excellent, although, having worked with elite athletes for decades, none of the muscle development ever looks right, especially on the arms, so that bugs me, but it's a very specific gripe that most other people probably won't notice. (2) The comic is short and the story and character development are contrived and incidental to the sex scenes, so it's basically an excuse to do transformation scenes and sex scenes. You wouldn't read it for anything else, and I personally, will probably never look at it again, unlike something like 'Powers'. I have no interest in or attachment to these characters. (3) Laney's change of heart at the end was jarring and seemed to be shoe-horned in so you could have a happy ending, which you seem compelled to do, either personally or by weight of opinion. It went against the whole flow of the story. I know many people are disappointed if there's not a happy ending to any story. I blame Disney, not you. Sometimes, you're the pidgeon and sometimes, you're the statue. That's why I like your Timber Grove stuff. (4) I like more natural-looking characters, not necessarily 'normal', but not video-game unrealism either. Again, I know this is catering to your specific desires, so it's your art and your choice. I can live with that if it's a good premise or story, but the more unrealistic the characters are, the harder it is to get immersed. You definitely have enough people agreeing with you on character design, but I think it limits your market, although, I doubt it limits your market as much as the TG theme does (which is what I'M here for, so don't get me wrong), so probably not a worry. (5) The sex scenes are effectively always the same. The dialogue is almost always the same. Same behaviours, same sequence of events, same pacing. Everyone always has to finish cumming simultaneously, cross-eyed orgasms, etc. I know there are probably a lot of people that love this and it pushes their buttons in just the right titillating way ,but I'm not one. I like variety, complexity and depth. "It's a TGT comic," as many people seem to say, so you have to accept that you're going to get 'the formula'. (6) I like that you had a harsher tone for once, and it wasn't so sickly sweet as most seem to get, although it seemed unrealistically intense and not really justified. Maybe there are people like that, who are just consistent, unchanging arseholes, no matter the situation. I haven't met any, despite being bullied in pretty much every part of my early life. The mood just turned soppy at the end and the bullies lost interest immediately, like flicking a switch. I know there is a magical mind control element to this, but you haven't made clear what the magic actually did, the timing and what was just normal personality traits, so there is no explanation for their flip and that makes it jarring. (7) No one ever seems worried about how they are going to explain or adapt to suddenly being a different sex, having a different physique or anatomically extreme genetalia in an instant. It always bugs me that no one thinks about this. Maybe, I'm just too pragmatic and not very spontaneous. Overall, it's standard fare for your stories, a potentially interesting premise, but at the bottom of the list of plots and characters, not near the top. Sorry if this seemed like a rant. I was actually trying to be constructive and brief - not my strong points.

Kaffeyette Lektor

great work felt a little rushed and with nice but open ending. I hope to see more, maybe an epilogue showing if reality adjusted to their changes or not and possibly the four of them aren't the only changed people on campus

I love the artwork, it's so gorgeous. The story felt rushed to me. I think with a longer story with each character given more developed time to reveal their inner struggles dealing with new bodies' feelings would make them more relatable. That's just my opinion.

Green for sure, probably my favorite one besides summer sisters.

André Neville-Hadley

I'm between yellow and red. Your rendering-artwork is as amazing as always. But, I'm still not a fan of the ideal you pursue with exceptionally big breasts and voyeuristic scenes and unnatural "cumming", which don't connect as much as the story. In that regard, SNU's storyline left a few things to desire.

Delicurious

Any comment is a constructive idea being good or bad, it helps you grow and be stronger on contents, as an artist and as person. So be creative and have yourself an amazing year of ideas. Hugz.

Adamma

I'd like to see a different, longer term story where one or more women use the hero to the point of exhaustion. Still, I'd like to see an epilogue episode to see if Phillip and Laney go the distance (I think they might) and to see how Kimmy and Jenny handle the long haul of dating, marriage, and kids.

Ray