Witness Protection: My Wife's Twin (Part 21)
Added 2022-01-20 08:00:03 +0000 UTCThings between Janet and Bonnie finally come to a head...
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Comments
Exactly... accidentally ;)
TGTrinity
2022-01-24 23:47:26 +0000 UTCThe camera is going to be “accidentally” rolling in the room right?
silky osullivan
2022-01-24 03:00:11 +0000 UTCIt'll wrap up in late March, possibly early April :)
TGTrinity
2022-01-22 00:53:33 +0000 UTCHoly crap! I knew this story was gonna get deep. But damn, this is dark stuff! A loving couple at each other's throats. You know both are going to cheat, something they never would have done before. A mobster on the way... Can they survive? Not just survive the mobster, but can their marriage survive this? I know it's just a story, but dammit, it's so hard waiting every few days for 20 more pages at a time. If this was an actual graphic novel, I wouldn't put it down until finished in one sitting. This is breaking my heart and killing me at the same time. That's a testament to your wonderful art and amazing storytelling. I know it will keep trickling out and it'll be done at some point. But it's hard, very hard waiting... I don't suppose you could post 20 pages every other day? Or daily? ;o) If you wanted to keep us glued to this story, it's working! Can I ask one question? I know you may not have or wish to answer, but how long will this be? 800 pages? 1200? Less? More? I know it'll rap up at the end, but how long are we looking at? Not that I want it to end anytime soon...
Larry Talbot
2022-01-22 00:09:01 +0000 UTCNope, this is based off an original story idea of mine :)
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:39:38 +0000 UTCYou have no idea.
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:39:19 +0000 UTCI know the answer ;)
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:39:06 +0000 UTCI would assume it would definitely fuck with her hormones, but the other stuff I'm not sure about.
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:38:41 +0000 UTCI sure did :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:37:56 +0000 UTCIt's super sad. Writing two people who clearly love each other fall apart like this was harder than I thought it'd be.
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:37:44 +0000 UTCYeah, we definitely wanted to highlight Bennie's issues with trust early on to make this moment a fair one. Wanted both characters thinking they're on the right side of this argument.
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:36:53 +0000 UTCWho wants a chill pill? ;P
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:34:57 +0000 UTCThank you! It's been super hard to write all this the last few weeks, so I'm happy to hear it's landing well :D
TGTrinity
2022-01-21 00:34:04 +0000 UTCWas? Still is...
Larry Talbot
2022-01-20 23:25:59 +0000 UTCThe drama around these two is written fantastic. Great work.
SitriAbyss
2022-01-20 21:02:17 +0000 UTCI don't know how they're going to recover from this. That was a big fight.
2022-01-20 17:19:19 +0000 UTCTalk about your sibling rivalry, somebody needs to either take a chill pill or get her brains fucked out.
Bob Fink
2022-01-20 14:52:45 +0000 UTCThis is so tragic. I'd like to imagine that Bonnie would have been more there for Janet if she wasn't dealing with this huge change that's been thrust upon her, but from the "I forbid you" comment, I have a feeling that Benni had a fair few control and jealousy issues that he never worked through. Janet is scared for her life and not only has no emotional support, but also has to deal with the raging ball of neurosis that is Bonnie. They're both in bad places, and that never makes for an easy situation, but one of them is trying while the other is trying to "man-up."
Faye Fatale
2022-01-20 13:14:00 +0000 UTCIt is kinda sad. They're both scared, for different reasons, and they haven't had the emotional awareness to see that in each other.
Skippy Hugo
2022-01-20 12:45:35 +0000 UTCHey! You got your emotion in my titty comic! ... Hey! You got your titty comic in my emotion!!!
Jenni Starr
2022-01-20 12:01:01 +0000 UTCElephant in the room... unanswered question: With the serum in mind, What WOULD happen if "bonnie" was knocked up? Would she completely lose her mind to hormonal overload? Would her pregnancy be accelerated? Would it fuck with her metabolism and cause her to rapidly pack on the pounds whilst locking her as a female permanently? Hmmmmm............ oh the possibilities... (personal preference, whichever option flesh's out her waist n' hips, and blows up her ass even more...)
#Insanity4Society
2022-01-20 11:17:27 +0000 UTCSeems like Bonnie has to put up or shut up. Or is that put out or shut up?
Ray
2022-01-20 11:05:03 +0000 UTCOh dear, now its all out war 😘
Alison St John
2022-01-20 08:10:58 +0000 UTC
