I liked the rough brushstrokes in the first rough sketch, so I dared to leave them as they were.
I like the touch of the brushstrokes, and by separating the rough and detailed areas, I can guide the viewer's eye, and the detailed color changes add interest to the screen.
I sometimes draw in a similar way to this, but it is still fun because I can work intuitively.
Timelapse
Procreate brushes work very well with analog-like touch painting.
https://discord.com/channels/878796904341835886/949118876325666896/1292910327159193763