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Selina's Adeverse Effects 2 - Feedback Poll

New picture pack was sent out to all futa and above tier patrons earlier today  - let me know what do you think about it, and how did you like it!

If options in the poll aren't enough, or you have suggestions on what to do or improve in next works, feel free to write your feedback in comments!

What do you think about this picture pack:

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Similar to my feelings on the End of Amazons arc (the latter bits), I think what this pack was missing were a few key images that zoom out a bit to focus on seeing the subject during stages of her growth and to appreciate size comparisons to other subjects and the environment. While getting the zoomed in and pseudo-animated growth stages are nice, I also want to be able to just appreciate a few images during the pack that show the entire (or most of) the subject. It may have been difficult here, but seeing a profile of Selina in the same shot as the woman across the table would have been nice before she grew to the ceiling. Another example is that, in End of Amazons, it would have been nice to see all of the goddesses standing together in front of Sara (or a top view of Sara and the goddesses circled in front of her). Seeing how they compared with each other in size and loomed over the landscape, gives the viewer a nice piece to appreciate and "rest" on for a minute (also, as someone rooting for an infinitely growing Sara, I would have liked to know if her growth had left her still towering over Zoey and the others at the end :P ).

R.D.


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