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The Golden Dragon Chapter 23 (The Cub and The Young Lion)

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I will be honest. I have no idea where you got the idea that Tywin will want Adrian to foster in Winterfell. The North is vast, sure, but it’s nowhere as rich as the South. Second, Tywin achieves nothing by fostering him there; if he wants Adrian to foster somewhere, The Reach is a much better idea. The Reach is rich, powerful, and is not on the other side of Westeros. As for why Tyrion was placed as the temporary ruler of Casterly Rock, that reason will be explained later. Tyrion has never seen Rhaegar and has no idea what kind of man he was, so he wouldn’t be able to figure out shit.

Drinor

This is very good. Ive always been interested in a scenario where Jon was the son of Cersei and Rhaegar but there are few stories of it and this is without a doubt the best, it’s really good but there a few suggestions I have if you would consider them. For one, Jaime in most of your stories seems to be like Sherlock Holmes or something of the sort. I don’t really remember him being this clever in the books and I more thought that it would make sense if Jaime was just reminded of certain characteristics of Rhaegar in him. I feel like it would make more sense for Tyrion to be the first person to figure out his true parents though that’s just me. On that note Tyrion being in a position of actual power ( acting lord of Casterly Rock in Tywins absence) doesn’t really make sense to me. A big thing with Tyrion is that he has never been in a position of power until becoming hand of the king so I don’t get why Tywin would pick him and not Daven or one of his brothers. Also I mean no disrespect but the convo between Tywin and Jaime here was kind of bad, Tywin saying “ I’m a pragmatist” kind of ruined it for me, I feel like it still could of been good if he just issued the orders and said he was happy about Adrian escaping. His kids don’t really disobey his orders like ever. I think Adrian is being set up to end up fostering in Winterfell and while I’m not against that because I see no reason why Tywin would turn down the chance to foster good relations with another one of the kingdoms via fostering Adrian in Winterfell, I really wanted to see (if it’s still happening) how Adrian would approach battle against Robb in the war of the five kings. Jon and Robb in the books are kind of opposites of each other and ignoring all of that I still feel like to would make more sense to foster him with of Tywins bannermen or at some southron keep. These are all just my suggestions or thoughts I think this is wonderful keep up the good work.

Loris D

You should post a pic of adult Adrian. I’m curious to see if he’ll look more Targaryen or Lannister

Tyler smith

No. First of all, I don't think I can use any AI to do that, and even if I did. I still would not publish them.

Drinor

Yeah, Joffrey is still around, so his dynamic with Adrian will be quite something.

Drinor

Tywin is glad that Adrian is safe, but in a more 'You are showing you are a true Lion' kind of way, making Tywin proud, rather than because of love.

Drinor

Thank you for the chapter , shit is about to go down , btw i wonder if you will do manga panel of the smut👀

MAEGHT Maxime

how do you get read aloud on it to work

james baume

Great chapter, its nice to see them starting to bond 😁👍

Extroyer 10329

Google docs has a translation setting. I don’t know if it’s good

MyAfroAteMyDog

To avoid problems with Patreon

Drinor

Nice chapter, I am a bit surprised that Cersei still had Joffrey with Jaime despite having Adrian but I guess that's bound to happen being with Robert.

Zeldris

Why you posting to Google Docs

Reasonablefish

Can i ask you something, if you can writer in patreon is better because i can't translate them in the Google docs, and i understand english but i get more into the novel if i read in my own lenguage (spanish)

Sebastiàn Gonzalez

Wonderful chapter, glad to see Jaime finally put all the pieces together (finally)

Jomahawk

I wonder if Tywin in his own way, is glad Adrian is safe

Tyler smith


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