The Hearts of Two Champions Chapter 11 (Not All Enemies)
Added 2025-12-22 21:07:22 +0000 UTCComments
I feel sorry for Roger. Mostly because he's on a path that tends to end in lonely miserly. He doesn't have to be. He can change. For his sake I hope he does. Change, however, requires effort. In this case I expect it will require a Lot of effort. He can do it, if he chooses. Sadly, I expect he won't. He'll make excuses why it's not his fault. I don't doubt he has a long list of people he can blame. He may plot vengeance. He will not look in the mirror and see who deserves the blame. Good luck Roger. You'll need it.
Brian Jordan
2026-02-16 05:26:48 +0000 UTCFleur is hostile towards Harry because she genuinely believes that he cheated. The thing is, Fleur is someone who believes that someone should never cheat to achieve something, and she herself has trained for a very long time to reach this place, and Harry, out of nowhere, is also the champion, which irritates her. There is another reason why Fleur is not using her logic to realise that Harry entering the Triwizard Tournament on purpose does not make sense, but those will be revealed as the story goes on.
Drinor
2025-12-23 22:31:51 +0000 UTCWell this chapter was certainly something special. Roger postulating to a group of female Veela students who couldn't care less and then immediately upon seeing Harry turned rabid and honestly acted like Draco. I loved how Harry and Luna did the right thing by telling Roger how pathetic he was acting and then just walking away that showed true exceptional character on Harry's end. Then again like Draco Roger tried to attack Harry while his back was turned and Fleur stepped in and tore him a new one. I do dislike how Fleur is treating Harry when he is innocent so hopefully their relationship will start to get a bit better soon. I mean they are the pairing for the story so the romance has to start forming at some point. I also don't know if you plan to continue the story beyond fourth year which hopefully you do as I love reading it and would love to see Harry and Fleur work together during Voldemort's rise to power throughout Year five onwards. I digress, looking forward to the next update and oh yeah Luna is just the best. I adore her so much :)
Cody
2025-12-23 04:24:02 +0000 UTC
